Watched the movie today and was dieing for some bit of romance in the end XD Agree on her eyes being more of a green color and his eyes being a dark brown/black color but over all, this first chapter has me intrigued and i can't wait till the next one (:

There seriously are not enough Klaatu/Helen fics out there. I really hope you continue this! I'm interested to see what direction you plan to take :)

I just saw the movie tonight, and im in love with their trust and connection with each other. please write more soon!

i just saw the movie a few days ago,and i was dying for a hellen/klaatu kiss! the fic is good so far,please continue :)

A few glitches in the story:

I have to agree with the last poster, Helen Benson's eyes are technically green. Although, I'm not sure if Jennifer Connelley's eyes are green, but they appear green to me. Just a magazine article about her said her eyes are blue, but I don't think they are. Helen's eyes on the other hand are green, you can tell in the movie. Then again, they used a special hue on the film that was supposed to look "Earthy". Don't know if that affected Connelley's eye color.

On to Klaatu...now Keanu Reeves clearly has dark brown eyes. In fact, they are almost black-ish in color. You can clearly see that his eyes are dark brown when the camera focuses on his eyes when he uses a telekenetic ability to subdue the agents around him.

As for Jacob, he seems to be a little older than 9 years of age you have him as in the events of the movie. Then again, I have no room to speak as it's not clear how old Jacob is supposed to be. He could be anywhere from the age of 9 to the age of 12.

Sorry if I seem over-corrective. I love the story regardless! Please, update soon!

So far I really like this.

Umm, just a bit of heads up you may want to double check the grammar cuz you have a few mistakes. Also, Hellen had green eyes in the movie not blue.

Other than that I thought everything was great. Can't wait till the next chap.

Hey! I'm liken the story! I think you should, Update it because it is really good! 8D

love it. please update

Alll riigghhht, a new TDTESS fic! *does a happy dance*.

It's not perfect, but I look forward to seeing where it's going! _