Tch, your Pyralis chapters are too short! This kid is cool. And you've done well incorporating some background information into her narrative, I take it that this is the purpose of these chapters but thought I should point out that it worked well!

"We have to kill Phoebe and Cole, and we have to do it now."

Best line so far ;-)

Well at least Phoebe shows SOME sadness at the lack of Prue... don't we all *snif*

Hi Jade! Been hearing rave reviews about this story and on this rare day that my reviews actually work, here I am! I'm looking forward to seeing how well you characterise Pyralis, she seems like a good character.

Wow, this was such a great story. Well done. Also, sorry, but there is *no way* i am watching star trek!

Oh god, that was so sad. Terrific piece, too bad you aren't planning on writing any more soon.*sniff*

I lubbed it, I really did. Just check my fav stories. :)

Okay, I'm back. I was reading past reviews and I saw the one where I'm like "Aw, Phyre died" then it went *pause* hehe 'phyre' oh I'm great. Anyhoos... am considering re-reading... must... resist... 'phyre'...

*screams loudly* ! You incestuous lesbium, here is a surprise review for you, my presum, and boosting you to an ALMIGHTY 125 REVIEWS! Don't you just adore me?

*tries to act like there isn't a gun at her head* woop! Good good good story. Poor Phyre all dead :'( all in all genius idea an awesome writing. :)

This fic reached me, I loved the prologue, it wa strong and was the only reaosn I kept reading as I generally don't read the longer stories.

A billion out of ten!

Sweetie thank you so much for the entirety of this! I bawled my eyes out and it was a good catharsis to move on with things in my own life not to mention the confrontation Phoebe and Cole's relationship was given, I loved it all! There were bits where I felt you could have been more dramatic for example Phoebe's need to turn AND Cole's, what the hell happened that "their" LOVE couldn't overpower? I get that if he didn't have Phoebe's hand to walk over the crimson carpet with, he perhaps wouldn't have turned...but it wasn't looking like that much! I thought perhaps Paige and Piper could have conspired a little less innocently to kill Phoebe's baby! Loved Cole's explanation at the end...it was clear they wanted to die, he wanted to die, or was it?

I would love to believe that Kalinda being Phoebe's namesake was sent a "Sign" "premonition" whatever from Phoebe and/or possibly Cole at the end to lead them to find Pyralis.

And I wish Cole and Phoebe weren't that evil after all he had originally planned to turn evil to faze Charmed Ones' enemies...yeah yeah yada yada the pull of evil was too great! I felt Phoebe would never have killed Michael like that especially in front of everyone including her daughter.

But I loved it all thank you! You never once falthered and that's just super!

Well JaYde, you know how much I lubbed this since I stole you and drafted you into my hoard of homies. Yes, the word 'homies' WAS apt wasn't it? You see you just put an 'o' in place of the 'ies' and... there's a good Jade. Oh no new Charmed fics? Well *slaps* for you my girl! Woohp! I am cheesin I finally decided to read this and give you a paige of reviews. But boy o boy, was this a great story or what?

Wow that was excellent and I'm not the P/C fan either but you made them likeable and that is very tough to do. I thank you for writing this and hope you will write more to come. Maybe about Piper? This is really good.

*Tear, Tear* It's all over! That was FANTASTIC. I can't believe it. The plot and the characters and the ending-Grade A. Start something new soon, please!

this is brilliant... cant wait for next chapter... love it. so sad though:O(

More ASAP..pleaseeeeeeee