By the way you never allowed to that again ever! love that line great story

This was the first one where Ginny didn't seem so serious all the way through. It was nice. And they are too cute! Great job!

Jazz

I liked your version of this "missing moment" from the books. Even though it has been done before, yours is still very different. I liked that you added in the part about Ginny's interest in Astronomy (it does make perfect sense, like you said!) and the two of them laying back to look at the stars together...very romantic! :) Personally, I have my doubts about how clear a shot their position would be from Gryffindor Tower, though...it is getting dark, after all, and they're by the lake, so not exactly right under the tower window. I also really like your descriptions of Ginny's eyes in the three stories...liquid honey is very poetic! :)

Very well done! One of the best takes I've read on this scene. Amazing character analysis.

It is very well ! Sorry, I speak not goed English.

But it was very cute.