NICE! You seem like a professional writer! make another chapter! or a sequel!

I love long chapters where a lot of things happen and apparently you are the queen of doing just that.

Have I mentioned how much I love this fanfiction?

I really have nothing to critique everything in my opinion is perfect! So I feel kind of bad because I can't offer any constructive criticism ;.

Oh well please continue writing, you are such a genius in this pairing!

P.S. Long live Gray/Lucy, Natsu/Lisanna, and Gajeel/Levy! I love you even more for supporting all of them.

Sayonara!

The insanity of this wonderful story astounds me! Too bad it's just a oneshot... wait. *reads again* Oh. Haha. Nvm. *immediately clicks author's profile and finds her drool-worthy collection of GrayLu*

O_O

I love yuuuuuu!

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Wow! this story is just amazing!

I thoroughly enjoyed denial, denial. You did a great job.

Woooowwww. This was really, really good. Everyone was in-character. It was convincing. Just great. Thanks for the read.

...I'm kind of pissed off at myself for not reading and reviewing this story earlier xP SERIOUSLY, this story is FREAKIN' AMAZING :DD and you did a great job writing in Gray's POV. Give yourself more credit x] I know you wrote a sequel to this story already, but if you didn't, I'd be happy with the way you left this story :3 That way, my GrayLu burned-out brain can connect to the actual Fairy Tail anime/manga LOLOLOL xDD

gray is sooo cool

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i really like ur stories sooo please create more GRAYLU stories.:))

:D I was literally grinning while I read this...

THIS IS JUST GREAT!PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE..

It is soooooooooo funny!

:D I was literally grinning while I read this...

Oh damnit, ! Y u delete my e-mail? There. :)

Now I'm off to read the sequeeel

I think I am going to be inwardly squealing for the rest of my life over the pure awesomeness that is this story. I love the concept, the characters, the dialogue, the plot, the everything! And I have a guilty pleasure for stories in which Happy says his catchphrase, "You liiiike her!" or "Dekiterrrru!":) Haha, Natsu was absolutely brilliant in this story! Who knew he could be such a "smartass", huh? And the ending had me in stitches. Ah, it just goes on and on... Fantastic job on this! I foresee a great deal of re-reads in my near future...

On another note, I can't help but comment on ICYSWEET34's review, just because I think she got the wrong message here:

/I find Natsu sometimes OOC. He is too naive to understand-/

-On the contrary, Natsu IS canonically naive. I'd go as far as to say he's stupid unless a battle is involved. I don't think he was particularly naive here because he was the FIRST one to notice Gray looking at Lucy. Even Gray commented about him being a "smartass".

/-let alone noticing Gray falling in love.../

-You misunderstand, missy. It's NEVER been stated ANYWHERE in the story that Gray is falling in love. He just LIKES Lucy and is in DENIAL. The point here is that Natsu & co. are being their silly selves by teasing Gray about Lucy. Plain and simple. No innuendos about "falling in love". That's just your imagination. (And even if there is, how can Natsu notice it anyway? You're forgetting he's Natsu DENSE. If Natsu DOES notice, then that's him being OOC, NOT the other way around.)

Now, I advise you to read the story again WITHOUT thinking of anyone "falling in love", just because there's no one falling in love just yet (besides the little mentions of Natsu and Lisanna). E-mail me if you wish to discuss this further

I like how you portrayed the insecure Gray. :) You have a nice flow and a very nice concept, too. Keep it up :

Although, I find Natsu sometimes OOC. He is too naive to understand, let alone noticing Gray falling in love...