u r such a good riter! keep this up! this is the best fanfic i have read so far!! go!

these two storie are some of the shitest stories on the web

Wicked! I read your previous story too. This is really cool.
I didn't expect Draco to share my birthday, so that was a rather good shocker. Hee hee. Is it real or did you just make it up? No, don't answer that, I'll find out myself.
Keep up the good work!

Cool idea and thanks for writing. As I enjoyed reading the plot.

You' ve turned Harry into a neurotic nut. I think Harry would finally figure out he has to move on with his love life. Some parts or so boring I have to pan down pages to find something interesting to read. Your a good writer but you have to have a little more excitement in your stories. regards

I actually like this time line and I think Harry shouldn't change it as these people exist. His sister and his brothers. Seems really confusing to me.

ok im not one to comlin often but i really think u should have brought back sandy i think that was an important part of the story.

An amazing story, I loved from beginning to end! Great job, and keep up the good work!

lovely

fave story

In a world which only he remembered, he would forever see the three children holding hands and running, the tangle of thin, tanned arms and legs, the sun glinting off the two black heads and the one nearly white one; he would ever hear the echo of their high-pitched laughter and feel their youthful naiveté and confidence like a fist around his heart, as they launched themselves fearlessly toward the indifferent wrath of the mighty sea.

This line has stayed with me for years, it's just beautiful. Wonderful writing.

Swet...theres another one! WOW!! Im so going to have to check that one out. Awsome.
Macaday me a nut (and your one too!)

Although I know its now canon for the Harry/Ginny ship, I think Harry deserves better than someone whose basis for liking him is because he's the Boy-Who-Lived. Harry despises that people seem to only see him as the Boy-Who-Lived and not the person he really is. The whole premise of the H/G ship is based upon Ginny's hero-worship of the Boy-Who-Lived - not Harry Potter, the neglected & troubled 16-year old who only wants a normal life. For all the crap he's put through, Harry deserves far better than a fan-girl.

Not to mention the whole R/Hr not making any sense given how arrogant, jealous and a slacker that Ron is. I just can't see the smartest, hardest-working witch of her age going for a complete git like Ron.

I'll just stick with fics that ship Harry with anybody but Ginny (no slash!) and has absolutely no R/Hr.

Another fantastic story, i cant wait to start on the third. Do you plan to write any more?

Best ever.