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Reviewing Reviewer 4/7/04 . chapter 21
I haven't had the time to go through the whole fic in great detail, but i speed read the entire series up until this point. I have to say...despite the fact that i think the fic is a little confusing...(time travel things don't do it for me but i admit you seem to have done very well in this fic with it)...with the timelines. All in all it's not a bad fic, if i had read it much earlier (which i'm surprised i didn't) I would probably say that this is the best fic i've ever read. But you'll have to make do with my saying that this is ONE OF the better fics out there.
Also, i commend you on your views and words of wisdom in your post-9/11 chapter. If there were more people in the world that think along the lines that you do, it wouldn't be such a shithole it is right now.
jmsoftball9 4/5/04 . chapter 1
Wow, that was amazing. I read the first of the trilogy a while ago and only now had time to read this one. It truely left be breathless. I am in complete and total awe at the quality and detail and effort that went into making this story possible.
Out of 21 chapters, I didn't spot any plot contradictions and only a few grammatical errors, but mostly I was just eagerly reading on to find out what happened next. It was a little wierd to accept Harry and Ginny together since I was such a big Harry/Hermione fan, but now I wouldn't have it any other way. It broke my heart when you described Harry's breaking when watching Draco and Ginny together. I really hope they end up together.
Rocky235 2/19/04 . chapter 21
This has been the most detailed and intricate story I have ever read. In addition to a well crafted plot, your writing is professional. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Rocky235 2/19/04 . chapter 20
I don't know how you do it, but this story gets better with each chapter. Not only is the plot imaginative but the writing is professional. You are truly talented.
Rocky235 2/18/04 . chapter 16
I've been reading this all day. It's very addicting, like Honey Dukes Chocolate.
Rocky235 2/18/04 . chapter 14
This is a story I would recommend to any fan. I don't understand why the people who read your first story didn't seem to follow on with this? Maybe they did on another site.
Wonderful tale.
Rocky235 2/18/04 . chapter 12
Superb! You are a first rate storyteller.
Rocky235 2/18/04 . chapter 8
Varied sentence structure, good grammar, and well written dialog, this is a great story.
Rocky235 2/18/04 . chapter 6
This is quite the adventure story.
Rocky235 2/18/04 . chapter 5
Yuor story is different from any others. Amazing!
Rocky235 2/17/04 . chapter 4
feel like I'm in the Twilight Zone. As bad as it is for me, it must have been exhausting for you. There is so much detail and relationship to get right, and you have.
You've left the world of the norm and created a different universe.
Good job.
Rocky235 2/17/04 . chapter 1
Good opening chapter with lots of surprises.
crrazed'angel 2/16/04 . chapter 21
AMAZING! sorry i haven't reviewed sooner but i haven't had as much time to read. this was really good.. at first i though that it was strange for Harry to be living a life with his mum.. but it was very well written and i enjoyed it a lot.. just like the first part of the trilogy it was great ... you have an amazing tallent, thankyou for sharing it with me.
until next time,
BranZaay
LoonyPhoenix 1/17/04 . chapter 21
The best of the trilogy, IMHO!
And the whole trilogy is the best thing I've read so far. Congratulations!
Catherine 1/3/04 . chapter 13
I don't know why there aren't more reviews of this story. It's absolutely gripping. I've read the first part of this trilogy "HP & the Psychic Serpent", and although this second part is somewhat darker, I'm completely hooked. Great job.
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