so. stinking. adorable.

LOVEDD IT!

i've been wanting to do a baby story to! but i don't know if it could stand up to yours!

This is great! I am curious and dreading the whole Mary pregnant story!

*sniffle*

Wow. This was beautiful.

I certainly hope the show portrays Marshall's involvement just as it is here.

Thanks for this!

That was really good! I really like the way you set up mary's reaction.

LOVELY. I have to say this did get me a little teary eyed, it was so sweet. I love a bit of Mary/Marshall fluff :)

I liked this. I wanna see how their gonna handle the whole pregnancy thing too. That'll be interesting.

I love the last line...that Mary thinks of the baby as Marshall's as well as hers :)

Awww... she might not be *quite* that forthcoming about it, but Mary really would feel that way. At some point, at least. Might take her a bit to realize Marshall's the best dad for her child... the best guy for *her.*

Thank you for a peek into that sort of future. It was cute!

Oh, I only wish it was really going to be Marshall's kid, too! But this would be the next best thing. :)

I enjoyed this. As you said, some nice happy fluff.

Very well done.

Personally I think Mary was letting him semi call the shot's because of the meds ;)

Thank you for sharing.

I. . . might have squeaked really loudly after reading this. I'm grinning like a fool. And people are staring at me right now. Crap. Loved it. Especially Daddy!Marshall. So squee worthy. Really, thank you for this!

Very nice, detailed, and beautiful writing. Well Done! I do have one small bit of criticism for future reference. Newborn babies don't actually smile. Its just one of those things that sounds picturesque and perfect in writing.

well if ot went down likethis that would be ok..thanks so much for sharing..

hugs

Oh, that was a great story! I loved it!

That is a very powerful and moving 900 words!