Very nice. I like the psychological aspects to this. Very good.

argh. must you leave saiyuki? i swear there are some decent writers in it now...and people who would revere your fiction properly. i know it's annoying not to get any reviews for something that's original and thought-provoking and unique and then see something nine chapters long about sanzo getting turned into a girl with 53 reviews but argh, ye shall be sorely missed...even if you DO write sanzoxhakkai *grin*

This is an impressive albeit confusing piece. However, that said, might I point out that the reader's sense of confusion seems deliberate and the prose itself more than makes up for it. While this piece is fairly old as such things go here at , it did indeed seem incomplete as if it hinted at a second chapter that was never released and I, for one, wish there was more.

Very nice, very well written, but it feels unresolved.

Beautifully written. I like the sort of ironic language you use, and the once-in-a-while repetition.