Huh, not a fun ending but sets up well for a sequel.

Though I wished it wasnt over it was a blast reading it

gaah i just want to kill robin in every possible way

known he should root in hell my poor poor raven

i hope you make a sequel where she gets her

powers back and tells cyborg everything what

happend and who the child is he understands and helps her to kick robins ass *evil smile* than they

ran away to hide from the others jsut living

as brother and sister and raising

slade/jacke so he had a good father

figure in cyborg but robin comes back

multiple times but they fight. jake is growing faster than normal kids and so on and on i hope

i haven given you maybe some ideas for the sequel

*lots of delicious cookies for inspiration.

ah jes by the way the story is amazing sweet and exciting and full of drama

i gratly accept the offer to bashing BB, starfire and

robin, cant robin just fall out from a very high cliff and die a very painfull death slade/jack is cute

and the name fits him

Slade still perplexingly has his grown up mind, so why is he telling her these things? And if Raven knows that Slade still has his mind, why is she being so nice to him? He just looks different? It's not that he actually is different; Raven would understand the distinction.

why does slade has two eyes when he has the wounds from his battle with robin?

Why does Slade have two eyes?

Wait! Let me get this straight... She's pregnant with his son, he's still being like psycho possessive and she's OKAY with this? ... I deff support a sequel because I am sooooo lost! But still that was great! :))

Ha ha, I agree with Quoththeraven1103, that's pretty much how I felt. Interesting idea, strange way to take it. I like it and I don't like it at the same time, kind of mixed feelings really. People are really OOC in some places.

Anyway!

Neat idea, good execution, all in all a good story.

O.o... :O... ... WTF!

... That is all

PLEASE Make ROBIN PAY! Cause I love Raven and all. So... PLEASE!

now I really want to know what happens next.

Ha ha, that's interesting. Strange that he wouldn't remember anything. Going to have a nasty shock when he gets back. Pff. Fancy Harold showing up. I'd say the Robin Raven thing was a bit much but hey, your story.

Try explaining that when they get back. "Oh yeah... guess what he did..."

Aww that last part... Just awww :)). I swear imma beat Robin AND Starfire AND Beastboy's asses! Grrrr! Updat soon please :)))

Not a flame, merely constructive critism.

First. Awesome story!

But your characters are OOC, Robin isn't that nasty, Raven should hate Slade with all her guts, BB isn't that bold and admitting and Starfire isn't that nasty.

Also your spellings aren't good.

On the other hand, you have a okay story in the works.

This isn't a flame. Update soon!