aw cute, I loved it. It was very well written. PLEASE CONTINUE! it was great

Loved it! I thought it was really well written. I did always wonder why they brought Hiei back even though they most likely knew he wanted to stay in Demon World. I liked that it was mostly in Kurama's point of view, it flowed better; in my opinion.

I like how you play with the words, using them just perfectly. The scenery you describe seems so realistic and also their feelings do too.

Their conversation doesn’t seem farfetched at all – just perfect. „I have no place in this world while the Makai calls to me.“ I love this sentence – so typically Hiei and at the same same says so much.

"I have never shared laughter, with anyone." Another lovely sentence. Their touch at the end is great.

Keep on writing!

aw such very sweet ending! w i can just picture it, hehe

Aww, that was really cute I like the way you do descriptions; most of the time, the weird descriptions I read in fanfic, which usually involve comparisons to gemstones and other valuable substances, make me roll my eyes, but yours are good. :)

oh... so sweet! made me smile :)

Ooh! This is an awesome fic! I love your portrayal of Hiei! It like... he doesn't really care what the reasons were, and won't form an opinion either way about them. But what he does hate is the side-stepping and avoidance. Oh, Hiei's just so lovable! So deep, even though he only presents a shallow surface.(and when you think about the depth of his surface, my calling it shallow really says something the depth under that).

This is unbelievable. Unbelievably brilliant, its so, so, so, VERy amazing. So well written, written with such an ease it makes it a pleasure to read, and understand, as if I were standing there watching. I loved Kurama and Hiei's reactions to one another, once again, at ease. They both remained in-character to the last word throughout the entire story. It was, as i said, amazing. You are such a very talented author. Thank you for this most brilliant of stories!

*squeels* KWAIINESS! iloveit, iloveit, iloveit! and u did really good with the characterization too! *gasp*

lol. yea i can see that happening. that has to be the most realalistic telling of them getting together that i have read so far.

Aw, he -does- need a hug now and then.

I really liked this! Your wrting style is fantastic! I havent seen any new Yu YU Hakusho fanfictions in awhile, do you still like it? But anyway, Great story! Loved it!

A very touching one shot that I'm glad I got the chance to read.

Cool!

WAH! That was so cute! I loved it! _

Hatoko