| Reviews for Ranma's baby |
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sB 6/16/13 . chapter 15 I think with all of his neuroses about gender, Ranma would have the opposite psychological reactions than you have him displaying in the story in regards to his curse and pregnancy. Would it be possible to write a story in which Ranma stays female during the duration? |
hitmanmarco 6/12/13 . chapter 15One guess what Ruka is going to look like. |
SkyStrider 6/8/13 . chapter 15It was a cute fluffy little story about two random people. Your writing style was amusing enough that I kept reading despite the fact the the characters were incredibly OOC without any explanation. Usually, I stop reading when I cannot recognize the characters anymore (which happened fairly quickly). I'm all for having the characters evolve/grow-up a bit, but this was way too fast without any grounding. You mentioned writer's block a few times - you might of had less if you stuck with the characters and explored some of their quirks a little more. Examples would be dealing with Akane's infamous cooking, Ryoga's curse coming to light at a distractable moment, Nabiki betting pool having larger consequencies, etc... You could still keep things very light and fluffy - for example having pregnancy change Ranma's taste buds so that he actually likes Akane's pickle, barley, and peanut butter cake which boosts her ego and confidence so that she can actually pull off a good meal as time goes by... Just a thought. - Skystrider |
X Miyuki-chan X 6/8/13 . chapter 15Thank You for the story! I enjoyed it immensely and am looking forward to a sequel an older Ruka! Keep up the good work! Miyuki |
gort420 6/7/13 . chapter 15cheesy or sappy, or mushy it's all good. |
znta 6/7/13 . chapter 15akane's baby warn me when you begin in it please |
Trishelle 5/19/13 . chapter 12 This chapter is great I can't wait to read more! |
lhaine07 2/19/13 . chapter 14it was the most anticipated event on this story. It was worth the wait. I am glad things turn out okay for ruka. I am glad her parents are ecstatic to meet her. love it. |
Weird Beard 2/5/13 . chapter 1This was a bit too far fetched for me, I'm afraid. I mean, are we honestly to believe that Ranma would eat eggs and toast made by Akane? |
BlackGirlAnimeLover 2/4/13 . chapter 14Before the baby was born: Ranma is so werid haha hell just say the simplest things that will make me laugh Ahj I luv him When and after: *sniff,sniff* you made it sound so beautiful Now just random: I am so gonna have to use some if this in my story, well when I get to those parts because I only have 2 chapters in mine but yahoo. Of course ill ask for permission when I get there but I'm not. Anyway great story can't wait for sequel! |
TamiLove 2/4/13 . chapter 14I've been squealing and crying the whole time through! This story's so cute! I can't wait to see more! |
RanmaFangirl2013 2/4/13 . chapter 14 W00000t an update again and Ruka is born! I was hoping Ranma would foolishly opt for natural birth lol but oh well I can hardly wait for the next update |
X Miyuki-chan X 2/3/13 . chapter 14That's so cute, she's finally here. Baby Ruka sounds so cute and sweet. Keep up the good work! |
Darkkinght 2/2/13 . chapter 13 Please make more I really wanna know what happen Next.. T_T Im A fan of this story to. |
Ranma fangirl201 1/15/13 . chapter 13 All this waiting for an update and chu gives us a cliffy T-T in some ways worth the wait but in others not so much. Good job tho can't wait for the next update as usual |