... I admit, this is not what I was expecting when Jecht was going to have some fun.

... HIS PURE MANLINESS ALLOWS HIM TO BREAK THE FOURTH WALL!

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!

There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but this was a very good read.

I can't wait to "see" Jecht punch out some gods.

SHIT'S GOING TO GET REAL.

"You could say that... Maybe I should show you my true power now!"

"That's interesting. Should I draw my sword now?"

Sephiroth, here's a Remedy for that Burn.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!

Good chapter. Just hoping that you didn't permanently make the most beautiful/deadliest female character of all time evil. and one more note, if you are playing at a ashe/vaan pairing, i suggest you play or at least read up about revenant wings, cause it pretty much makes it clear that the vaan/penelo pairing official. other than that, great chapter, specially Magus' comments at Lihtning

If I were a Lightning fan I would probably give you death threats, but since I'm not, I'm just going to say that I'm pretty curious as to how Serah became evil here... With Lightning I can just imagine what happened though it's just a theory

Oh snap!

Just... Oh snap!

Dat ending!

Shit's getting real!

*clutches sides while laughing* only Sora would actually try to eat the parts of a ship. 'We even have our mandatory, illogically big RPG backpack.' another hilarious part and to top it all off Laguna named a ship after himself! Where do you come up with this stuff?

Oh, things are starting to heat up!

More hearts in the Fiend's Cauldron, stat!

... Sorry, I've been playing a lot of Kid Icarus: Uprising. Totally stealing me away from my fanfiction.

It's even making me think of ideas for a Devil May Cry/Kid Icarus crossover.

All I have to say is wow, but in a good way.

*laughs at the 'card game on motorcycle' bit* ROFL! Oh man, that never gets old! X3

Yay, Vaan's coming!

... Is that my fault? :B

Oh, Squall, you're in for it now.

... I half-expected Cloud and Squall to be the ones playing the card games on motorcycles. Needless to say, I'm pleasantly surprised (and I c wat u did thar with some of their cards).

Neku, if you think people are noisy now, just wait until you meet some of the more hyper-active characters...

well... that was.. confusing. I noticed that you have a few misspellings and grammatical errors, like when you're typing 'except' it becomes 'expect' which is very confusing but that aside this is a very action packed chapter.

- *sees you* Oh, hey there! *sweatdrops*

Ah, so Marty McF- I MEAN Noel joins the ever-growing party, eh? ...Does he really say 'Exactly' so many times in the game? (I haven't finished watching HassanAlHajry's FFX13-2's walkthrough, yet...) If so, it gives me a great idea for a future convo;

-insert character of choice here-: Exactly!

Noel: Hey, that's my line!

Gilgamesh: HEY, THAT'S MY LINE!

You brought Noel in? I bet this is going to be very interesting in the next chapter.

Hey, are you going to bring Serah Farron into the heros' group alive/or something like Zack's case? Along with Mog(Serah's Mog, I mean. Isn't there another Mog in this story?) of course.

This make me happy. XD I was wondering if someone would ever notice the rather close similarities between Celes and Sephiroth; both were quite literally born and raised for war. The only difference is that one wants to be human; the other wants to be a god and could care less for human emotions.