Chilling, utterly creepy and oddly beautiful (yeah, that last one seems REALLY out of place with the other two, doesn't it?).

You have a real knack for condensing serious emotion and imagery into a small amount of space. I totally agree that to increase his own suffering Dean would be made to torture someone he knew...though I gotta admit as I was reading it and when I saw "a name" I was expecting for it to be John.

That was really good. I honestly wasn't expecting it to be Bela and it kinda was sad in a really well written way.

NNNNNNNGH. My lovely, lovingstuff friend, you are some kind of lovely writerly goddess, for truth.

I hope if I say "beautiful" you won't automatically think, "I've befriended a serial killer. D8"

(but I guess if you want to think that, you're absolutely allowed, XD)

Amazing as always, dear one.

- Slinker/Ali/not-a-serial-killer

That's actually something I hadn't thought about before. Not his time in Hell, but if he ever encountered Bela. I wouldn't generally read anything depicting what it was like for Dean, but as I like your stories I gave it a shot. :3 It was good.

Wow. This is excellent. Written in very good prose. Very thought provoking. And creepy. But I really like it; I never really thought about anyone writing about Dean's time in Hell, but I really like the way you've done this. It seems very realistic. And oh, the irony of Bela.