This was extremely well written! I love Hassan and I think that you captured his character and personality perfectly. :)

Hassan is my favourite character from The Kite Runner. It's nice to get in his head for a moment. You did a very fine job putting the scene in Hassan's perspective. I really enjoyed reading it.

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That was well-written. Continue writing.

I can't believe this story has no reviews yet. I love it, I really do. Well done 3