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JamesTKent 5/12/12 . chapter 37
Sorry I've been away from this tale for awhile - I lost track. I like where you've gone with it, though I confess I figured out that Rina was Chloe's the way you portrayed Chlo's reaction to her, and Lois' . . . then Gabe's. The kid responds to family.

Where you're going to go with the tale, I don't know, but I've really been enjoying your character interaction.
morring1 5/9/12 . chapter 37
Wow, ok I have no clue as to why I had not read 36 weird. Anyways, chapter 36 was a great chapter as always. Loved the Chloe and Clark bond, and chapter 37 was very interesting. So Chloe now has a very very special little one. As always can't wait for the rest.
Carrie 5/9/12 . chapter 37
lol Lois is awesome. Her part at the end was great. I really liked this chapter.
GoChlollie 5/9/12 . chapter 37
Oh, I hope Ollie will manage to get happy-Chloe back. Now she's pissed, but I believe she sees the reason behind his actions and the truth behind his words.
Madlenita 5/9/12 . chapter 37
Oh, Lois idea how oliver is going to make CHloe happy again is wonderful and so funny!And i hope it is true ;-)

Thanks for this chapter
Raya 5/8/12 . chapter 37
Great chapter
Hellzz-on-Earth 5/3/12 . chapter 36
Oh Snap! Now Chloe knows the truth which Oliver already suspected and now he's going to be in trouble for that bit of info. too. Man my boy cannot catch a break!

I love my girl, but right now her attitude is way off. She needs to remember that Oliver and Lois love her more then antyhing and that they all want to protet one another from Lex at all costs. Chloe has done things and kepts secrets too so please have her forgive Oliver and Lois and understand where they were coming from.

Not mad at Bart for letting Chloe know. It's a good thing it happened now rather then later anyway.

Thank you for the awesome update.

Happy writing.
hednin 5/2/12 . chapter 36
I Knew¡ Ja¡. Oh... Oliver is going to love that little girl so much... Another great update. Thank you
Madlenita 5/2/12 . chapter 36
Ok, my jaw dropped too... What a cliffinger...

I can't wait for next chapter, and their reaction to this news...
Carrie 4/30/12 . chapter 36
Hi, I came across this story over the weekend and am all caught up. I want to tell you that I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. You've really pulled me in and I love it
Bree 4/29/12 . chapter 36
This has me so pumped up. I love how you ended the chapter. Good job.
Sarai 4/29/12 . chapter 36
I had a feeling she was hers :) Really great chapter. I can't wait for more
GoChlollie 4/29/12 . chapter 36
Sorry I haven't got time to comment on the previous chapter. But I like both of them.

I had that feeling, that Rina would turn out to be Chloe's daughter. I reeeeally hope it wouldn't complicate her relationships with Oliver, I think they're already passed that Davis stage. And I hope she'd forgive him and the guys for leaving her in thedark.

Now, when they know all of Lex's evil plans, they should be a team, tehy should stick together.

Can't wait to see how everyone is dealing with the news!
Raya 4/28/12 . chapter 36
OMG! Great chapter.
Bree 4/28/12 . chapter 35
That was a great chapter. I'm really excited to see what happens next.
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