 princess loulou 11/16/04 . chapter 1 that was wicked! but jake wouldn't make Rach & Tobias stay out of the mission just for that. think before you write son! |
 Lomelindi 7/5/01 . chapter 1Cool. Very neat story. |
 Kyra 9 4/11/00 . chapter 1 That was good, I really like the opinions of everyone, they were great. |
 Ilana 7 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Well, that was kind of boring but well written. Also, each character's introduction and other descriptions of themselves seemed like a summary of all their character conflict throughout the series. It wasn't really necessary and it sounded kind of dull and repetetive. |
 Brat Girl 9 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Good job ) |
 Kimmie 9 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Awesome! One question: What is Forever 21? It sounds like a $20 or below store and I doubt Rachel would go there. :) |
 Kittysweep 8 4/11/00 . chapter 1 I like it, it's good. |
 Vorkosigan 10 4/11/00 . chapter 1 That was really, really good. More characteristic of the Animorphs, and less plot-with-no-purpose... me like lots. |
 Checkers 8 4/11/00 . chapter 1 It's sort of sweet, in a way. It's just I can't see Jake ordering R & T out of a mission, even if they did do what they did. He needs them both. I like it. I could use a little work, but I like it. |
 clara200 4/11/00 . chapter 1 great story a short verion of a mega morph
book. |
 Lynn 4/11/00 . chapter 1 really good I would love to see a sequel nice job |