Can't wait for chapter 3! This fic is..unique. I find it amusing that the evil demon is getting what it has earned. Seriously, the kyuubi is literally made of evil.

Woah, this is kinky stuff, I LOVE IT!

:) nice keep it up.

ha ha ha. wow. the kyuubi whimpering like a dog. there aren't many fics like this. I do enjoy the ones i find however. Update soon ok

Im just laughing ...

Kushina Is Really Really And Truly Starting To ANNOY Me!:/

Oh I Will Enjoy Breaking Kushina"Evil Grin"

Kukukukuku

You know, Canon Hinata would probably go along with the whole idea of submitting totally to Naruto, because Naruto wouldn't do anything that could seriously harm her.

That said, I can think of some demeaning things to do to Kyuubi-chan. Watersports are among them, mostly because since this all takes place in the mindscape, Naruto doesn't NEED to relieve himself. Another would be gang-banging her in various forms, like Minato Namikaze, Hashirama Senju, Tobirama Senju. Naruto might draw the line at making his doppelgangers look like Madara Uchiha or any other members of Akatsuki because there has to be SOMETHING he can reserve as punishment.

Also, if Naruto finds that he LIKES this darker side of human sexuality and starts using it in his relationships, well, he's got the perfect test-sub because she can recover from any injury and no-ones going to care if he uses the Kyuubi like a toilet-slut. Remember that with feeling in the skin comes pain, so if Naruto wanted to find out, say, how many blows to a subs callipygian posterior it takes to go from pleasure to pain or how long a sub can kneel on a hardwood floor in seiza position before breaking, all Naruto has to do is look inwards and test things out.

I'm impressed, even when playing Dom Kushina maintains her amusing sugar high.
Having such power over Kurama would certainly be intoxicating, still I hope there is a little more than that considering Naruto he is more powerful than the majority at the end of part1 with no ill affect. Can Kurama even be called Kyuubi-chan when she only has one tail?

As always I look forward to your next update!

heh, the horror of finding out your mother was a dominatrix.

great

Good chapter please continue soon.

yay an update are you going to continue or are you going to let it sit there like in TFF?

Awesome chapter.

Well shit, it's been a while. Good to see you updated.

I recommend you differentiate your author's notes from the actual text of the story in some way, with a line break or making it in bold font, just so it's clear.

Great story so far hope that you will finish it!