I hate Ray, he's a bad person. Good thing he's dead

I like it. Yes, there is not much plot, but it's obviously supposed to be that way, which means that it's really good anyway. I'm sick and tired of everyone hating on Ray (particularly before they even met him); they just seem to hate anybody who gets in the way of Tiva. Thank you for portraying Ray positively.

This didn't really have much of a plot..

That is a paragraph, not really a story, some plot would be nice.