|Reviews for Aftermaths|
| Ziodyne967 7/23/12 . chapter 2
These stories have been great so far! d(_) I'd appreciate it if there were more moments between Verde and King Corobo more. XD
| Guest 7/23/12 . chapter 2
Hey these stories are great! Can't wait for the next chapter. XD
| Sir Starlll 7/4/12 . chapter 2
Oh god, I HATED the Shsikebaboo fight. I kept losing over and over again. It took me MONTHS to beat the king...
I like how you're breaking it up into sections, though I have one complaint: the writing itself doesn't seem to flow. I mean, you have some great ideas, but maybe if you made each section a paragraph or two longer, and read what you wrote out loud while editing, it would help.
Anyway, keep up the good work!
| Soulbow109 7/1/12 . chapter 1
Story looks interesting hope u update again one day.
| Luckenhaft 5/29/12 . chapter 1
I understand what your feeling. there are times i wish i could just leave alice behind so i didn't have to see her die. but when she isn't there with me i get so nervous. there are even times i wish i could make alice my queen instead of the princesses.
| flyboy179 5/10/12 . chapter 1
keep it up, sorry i'm bad at reviews
| Sir Starlll 12/15/11 . chapter 1
This was really good. I just beat Little King's Story, so I figured, I may as well read some fanfics, now that I won't see any spoilers.
Did Verde actually say 'Enjoy every moment you have, you may miss the chance'? I really didn't talk to her that much... *Hangs head in shame*
Keep the chapters coming! Really!
| Minn 8/27/11 . chapter 1
Very good so far.
| Anon 6/24/11 . chapter 1
This is getting interesting, I wanna see the part on the next King!
| littlemsbookworm 5/30/11 . chapter 1
i like it so far :D keep up the good work!