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| Reviews for Aftermaths |
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  Ziodyne967 7/23/12 . chapter 2 These stories have been great so far! d(_) I'd appreciate it if there were more moments between Verde and King Corobo more. XD |
| Guest 7/23/12 . chapter 2 Hey these stories are great! Can't wait for the next chapter. XD |
 Sir Starlll 7/4/12 . chapter 2Oh god, I HATED the Shsikebaboo fight. I kept losing over and over again. It took me MONTHS to beat the king... I like how you're breaking it up into sections, though I have one complaint: the writing itself doesn't seem to flow. I mean, you have some great ideas, but maybe if you made each section a paragraph or two longer, and read what you wrote out loud while editing, it would help. Anyway, keep up the good work! -StarIlI |
| Soulbow109 7/1/12 . chapter 1 Story looks interesting hope u update again one day. |
| Luckenhaft 5/29/12 . chapter 1 I understand what your feeling. there are times i wish i could just leave alice behind so i didn't have to see her die. but when she isn't there with me i get so nervous. there are even times i wish i could make alice my queen instead of the princesses. |
| flyboy179 5/10/12 . chapter 1 keep it up, sorry i'm bad at reviews |
| Sir Starlll 12/15/11 . chapter 1 This was really good. I just beat Little King's Story, so I figured, I may as well read some fanfics, now that I won't see any spoilers. Did Verde actually say 'Enjoy every moment you have, you may miss the chance'? I really didn't talk to her that much... *Hangs head in shame* Keep the chapters coming! Really! -StarIlI |
| Minn 8/27/11 . chapter 1 Very good so far. |
| Anon 6/24/11 . chapter 1 This is getting interesting, I wanna see the part on the next King! |
| littlemsbookworm 5/30/11 . chapter 1 i like it so far :D keep up the good work! |
