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| JaceDamian23 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abusei really wish you wrote more i liked it |
| BlackHalliwell 2006-11-16 ch 1, | abuseawesome |
| DumDiDum 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseGod, I almost end up in tears nearly every time I read this. |
| C.Y.Myers 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abusewow. that's sad and sweet and i loved it. i generally like happier endings, but this was good. i might start crying, actually. i feel so bad for ron. and percy. do you know how long i was mad at percy for the 5th book thing? a long time. i got over it a while ago after telling myself he'd eventually see the light and realize how stupid he was behaving. this story was really sweet and totally shows a side of percy i could never have imagined. i swear, i would recommend this story to my sister, but she hates incestual stuff. we're both slash finatics though. keep up your beautiful writting. you are clearly very talented and i would love to read more of your stories.~ |
| Willowscribe 2003-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh...My... I never thought I'd like this pairing but you got me there. I loved it. Thanks. |
| Molly 2003-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved this fic. its a really great idea except i dont think percy always got all the attention when they were younger... i always got the impression that ginny had/has the most attention so percy works for the ministry and stuff to receive praise from his parents and siblings... poor percy |
| Rebbie 2003-06-14 ch 1, | abuseOh god! Tears were coming into my eyes at the end of this. It's been so long since I read a fic that really touched, and this one sure did. Wow, it was absolutely wonderful. Thanks a bunch for writing this. |
| Minymoon 2003-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh how sad!*crys* |
| basil 2002-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseNormally incest makes my guts want to twist round each other to choke off the bile, but you're so far the only one (besides Aspen, and even then I squirm) to make it bearable. Actually, you're better than her in a way, since you don't elevate it with beautiful language, but make it a part of the character. It doesn't take up much more space than necessary, involve little children being incredibly precocious sexually, or talk about it in terms that seem to go very much against a character's patterns. The interaction seems believable throughout, and the ending just made me gulp and go "yeowtch." |
| Kai Michi 2002-11-06 ch 1, | abuseWah. ::sniffles:: So sad! ;___; But really well-written. But still so sad... |
| Jace 2002-09-02 ch 1, | abuseCor blimey! I am sadly, sadly addicted to Weasley slash. And this was good Weasley slash! Well...I mean...nothing actually happened. But it should have been! Poor Ron, in love with Percy...and Percy just turning him away! That was brilliant...good work! |
| scarlet 2002-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abusegawd i'm disturbed. it was extremely well written and believable, but gawd i'm disturbed. i like slash, alot. but... brothers... wrong... BROTHERS... |
| Gwen16 2002-04-13 ch 1, | abuse:chokes: O, just beautiful. |
| Miyama Ishida 2002-04-10 ch 1, | abusethat's so sad.... *snif snif* miya-chan |
| Mireille626 2002-04-07 ch 1, | abuseI loved the first version, and yes, this is better. You do a good job with Ron; sometimes when there's that big of a time-gap between canon and the story, I feel like I don't know the character any more, but yes, that's still Ron. I love that the very things that draw him to Percy are also the reasons why they aren't close as siblings. (Well, that and the whole incestuous-longings thing.) And the ending *hurts,* which is the only way I could see this particular bit of their lives ending. (Not that things couldn't get better.) I am, as usual, speechless with awe. |