| Reviews for The Last Yagami Child |
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Miikachan 4/3/13 . chapter 7 Oh my gosh,I love this story so much! This is really the only story I've ever read about Sayu and it's really good. Please update again soon! |
The-Otaku-Pervert 4/2/13 . chapter 7Ohh this is amazing! I can'twait for another update |
mchalla4 12/2/12 . chapter 6I'm going to start off by saying that I love your story for a few reasons: 1) I'm a sucker for Near/OC fanfics 2) Your storyline is absolutely brilliant! I love it :D 3) I really like how you've integrated your OC's into the story in an original way. You've provided it in a logical manner and I have to admit that I can't find a single plot hole. One thing that I have noticed that you need to work on is grammar and spelling. It's nothing major, but there's a few syntax mistakes in a chapter, which are pretty easy to fix. Good luck with your story and Happy Writing! Can't wait to see the newest update :D |
FlowerBlooms 11/13/12 . chapter 6I LOVE this story! |
LeftyPixie 11/11/12 . chapter 5 Write faster please. I think this is the first SayuxNear I've read that had a lot of thought and planning put into it, keep up the good work. |
Miikachanx 8/19/12 . chapter 5Hmm I wonder where Elle will be moved too? |
I Am The Real L 8/14/12 . chapter 4Plz update soon |
The Original Undertaker 4/26/12 . chapter 4i like this alot |
NanaLoveChel 4/1/12 . chapter 4 Update? |
Miikachanx 1/29/12 . chapter 4I liked this chapter a lot! I think you've developed Sayu's charater very well along with Elle's. I hope you update again soon. -Miika-Chan |
Mangafreak666 1/27/12 . chapter 4your story is really good, i like it. but there is something that's been nagging me, in your story it says that Sayu has a brother(Light) and a sister, who is she? please update soon! |
Emerald Eme-Pon Walker 1/26/12 . chapter 4Ohhh... Sayu has a crush on Near. |
DiamondRainbows 1/26/12 . chapter 4Aha So here's Laine -w- Just admit you love Near, Sayu. DOO IT xD |
DiamondRainbows 12/22/11 . chapter 3That was great! Awesome job! Plz keep it up! |
Miikachanx 11/23/11 . chapter 3Oh my gosh! I lovvvveeee this story! I've never read a fanfic with Sayu before! I'm impressed! keep up the good work! Miika |