Goodness me - I could read this stuff for hours! The interactions between Jack and Lizzie are SO good lol most entertaining! And its beautiful too - their mutual love for the Pearl and sea... Quality stuff - thank you :D

Great twist in the story - can't wait to meet Jamie and see where they all head next! :D

Ladybug

All this is just so Jack , I can picture him perfectly and

I like Elizabeth not being the typical damsel in distress

Fantastic Story! Can't wait for the upcoming chapters. I love the continuation of the 4th movie with the like trumpets and goats thing. :) It's good to see there are still diligent sparrabeth fans out there like me. Great job once again. I really like the way you are writing Jack. The dialogue seems so much like that of the actually writers.

Bahahaha! Now i understand! lol What an insult! The great Captain Jack Sparrow arrested and nearly hung for sheep theft!

But it still gave him the desired end result - a chance to see Elizabeth. Things always seem to work out for Jack ;)

Great chapter, made me laugh a heap ('I had to fight her off, you know: for the eunuch's sake. She's quite desperately besotted with me..' Haha classic! And so typically Jack!)

Can't wait to read what happens next :D

Ladybug

Lol, that's really funny! Please add more soon :)

Eeeka! A new one! So exciting :D

Loving it already, not just the characters but the storyline too ;)

And I can't help echoing Elizabeth - what was Jack doing with those sheep? lol Can't wait to find out - and meet Jamie too!

Thanks for the reading - hope there's more soon!

Ladybug

Once again, great chapter. Jack & Elizabeth are perfectly in character. Quick update. Keep up the good work.

That ending killed me lol. :')

Please add more soon :)

I really like this. Honestly, when I first started the first chapter, I was slightly confused as to the setting, characters, time, etc. Not to mention that Captain Jack Sparrow's thoughts are rather confusing. However, by the end of the first chapter, I really got into it. You expressed Jack's thoughts and feelings perfectly. Great job.

I really have to say this is a good story. I'm waiting to read more of it. It's hilarious and everybody is so like themselves or how I imagine them to be at least.

Delightful! Well written and true to character. Keep 'em coming!

Poor Jack- he's taken just about every loss he could, save one...

Please don't leave him hanging! In either sense. ;)

Great beginning. I am interested to see where you could take this. Update soon.