Heh-heh...okay, I realize that it's possible you didn't mean to write it as a parody, but that's how it seemed to be to me...
But then again, it *is* a humor fic...
They're right though-she *should* have moved to a different city than sunnydale if she wanted *normal*. Or at the very least read up on the Sunnydale hap'nans, so at least she'd know what she was getting into...

This is HILARIOUS! :) You are a very talented writer. I like your new characters- very believable! :) Great job!

Well it's not funny...it's hillarious!

Loved it, ROTFLMAO and all that and all I have to say is MORE MORE MORE SOOOON

You know, I always wondered about how much the people who moved to Sunnydale really knew... This is great, well-written and very funny!

great stuff. Liked it lots!

alex

that was great, I loved the warning away from Buffy, very cool. Since I'm a great believe in sequals, I don't suppose...?

*lol* This was hillarious!

This is really cute. Glad I stopped to take a look. Sunnydale through the eyes of visitors is always a fun concept. Through the eyes of a *cop*, though-that's real fun. Thanks!

Clever idea!

I just couldn't help laughing at this.

Love the older cop warning her about leaving Buffy alone

Great work.