This is exceedingly well-written and well thought out. I really enjoyed your portrait of the near future and the roles each of them must play. The descriptions of Schneizel were spot-on.

Beautifully written. I'm honestly surprised that it doesn't have more reviews. For me, and probably a lot of people, this was the saddest part of the series, and you captured it perfectly. The fluent, descriptive, and captivating words and phrases you used made me see this through a different eye.

Truly a fantastic piece.

Thank you, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL GIFT. This is truly an interesting premise on what could happen after the end of the series. Ruling the world indeed xD /roots for Schneizel all the way

But oh Suzaku. He is totally a leaf in the wind, the way he has always been his whole life ;_;

Well written for that i give it a high 10/10 for style since the spelling/grammer mistakes are few and mostly just things like not separating two words.

But as a story(or oneshot as it were) and something like an epilogue(altough the epilogue in the anime took place months after death of L) it fails due to obvious holes in relation the the original plot that really shoud have been easy to avoid.

So overall it gets a 6/10