Excellent! If your teacher didn't give you an "A" they should be slaped.

Wow! Being a published poet myself, I have to say that this poem is better than most peaple would even dream of writing. Go on and enter into the poetry contest, you'll be surprised. ttfn

I like! I like! Do you write any other fanfics? I wanna see if there as good as this!:p

This was really good. You must have gotten an A on it. Nice

This is a great poem! It really does describe their relationship! I love it.

Whee! Love the poem, and I did the same thing! 'cept it was a journal on love. I had a huge disclaimer on how love sucks unless it's fictional, and did a really depressing Brad and Naomi fic. it was right after the cup at a celebration party, and it was all emo-ish and i basically just stopped coz i was getting myself depressed with it. ;;

Awwwwwwwww...That was so sweet. Nice poem. _ B/L 4ever!

good poem! please write more soon!

Great poem. I hate writing poetry, but reading it is another story, and again great poem.