I like the 'Kenobimeter' mention - and Obi-Wan's vanity at his appearance, very good. The Paxxi and Guerra inclusion I am wondering about, as you don't seem to like them. The Whills part was nice.

wish i could write like you

this is my favorite SW fanfiction

Haha...this story is so good! I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next. I especially can't wait to see what'll happen once Anakin joins the picture. Update soon!

I love this! Keep it up!

Characterisations are perfect!

This is such a cute and fun story! I love how Qui-Gon woke Yoda in the middle of the night :) Great job!

The concept of Darsan Avat is really interesting. It makes sense, and explains well the way of the Force.

I like the visit to the Whills. Your description of Anakin's rle of Chosen One is sound, and I agree with the importance of Obi-Wan's role in this. He is the reason the Light will remain at the end.

The realtionship between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan is very touching. Poor Qui-Gon was a paranoid father in the beginning, it was cute. They do make a good pair, they complement each other.

I like how you manage to balance humour (the eating lightsaber fish, the alien twin, the cuteness of Obi-Wan...) and action. I'm really looking forward reading more!

I had my lightsaber swallowed by a fish

I laughed for a good 5 minutes at that one! Thanks!

I have found your story by chance and I really like the plot. I only hope that this will be a total AU and have a happy end at the end of it.

Jajajajajajaja "He did not know about the Kenobimeter" An other reason to love Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon!

I love this story, particulary this chapter..

I love this story. Interesting how you included the Wills with Anakin as a guide.

Yeah! Go Obi-Wan, love the new chapter

Awesome! Update soon! *clicks all below options*

Thanks for the update! I love how you're incorporating JA (although I have some serious issues with that series)and the descriptions of Obi's actions and Qui's care for him. I look forward to reading more!