I'm amazed that you are capable of giving so many different characters a into-depth characterisation, also the not-so-nice ones. Even your Pansy is interesting. Far too many, in my opinion, attempt to make the Slytherins 'nice' (and good-looking, *ahem*Dramione*ahem*), which only result in OCCness, a very flat characterisation and a far from intriguing read. All of your characters are realistic, and keep the way the are portrayed in canon - which make them more interesting to read about, even if they not exactly sympathetic. :-)

I really like this, so far:) Nott is a nice character, and I like him, even though he's a slytherin. Does he like Pansy?

Looking forward to reading the rest. Thank you for posting:) /Rebecka

Interesting beginning. I always enjoy your look at other characters. The only issue I have is the lack of quotation marks around the dialogue - it makes it a bit difficult to read.

I love how much Draco-bashing there is in your stories. And it's not like he's acting out of character or anything, of course. :-)

Interesting start. I wonder what Draco is planing.

Does this fit with your time-line? I attempting to read your stories in chronology order.

Interesting, I wouldn't have thought Draco could come up with something like this, but then again it fits his character to be trying to get Neville and the other Gryffindors in trouble. Draco was written perfectly, it reminds me of how he behaved in Order of the Phoenix when he was part of Umbridge's batch of minions. My guess is that Neville, Luna, and Ginny broke in :)

too early to tell how good it's going to be, though I like the characterisations, but it's an unusual start, which is always nice