i love this story, i wish you would have kept writting

First of all, love the chapter title. Haha.

Uh oh! I hope Paige isn't getting sick again. I'm worried about her. If Danni is noticing something wrong, then something probably is wrong. Paige and Danika have been friends forever, afterall.

Aw! It's so cute that Paige likes Michael. I think he'd be good for her. :)

Flipping Abruzzi the bird and then spitting in his food. Bahaha! GO PAIGE! She's got some balls there!

OMG! My heart was racing when they started talking about T-Bag. I'm sure you can guess why. I won't say anything though because I don't want to give anything away.

Bellick ew! Him and Mahone sure seem to like each other. *I say sarcastically* :P

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!

Your disclaimer on this chapter had me laughing my a** off! Bahaha! I'm going to sue you just to see if your 'allergies' flare up. *wide grin*

Uh oh, Danika not telling Paige something doesn't sound good. I have a feeling this may create some tension between the girls.

So Paige didn't know they were brothers. Interesting.

WOW! I can totally picture Paige's face when Danika told her that Michael was married. Poor girl, but it totally gave away that Paige is beginning to have feelings for dear 'ol Mike. :D

Danika is such a mysterious character. She always wants to be alone and the flashbacks you include of her life only make me want to know more about her. I mean, who the hell was the man in the coffee shop. I picked up that it apparently must be her ex-boyfriend, but who is it, damn it? I wanna know! I hope you reveal soon!

Uh oh! The authorities are hot on their trails. I'm beginning to wonder who the boss of Martin and Welsh is. He doesn't seem like a friendly guy. Hm...?

Danika sure has had a tough life. It seems like it's mostly because she never had the proper guidance she needed. It's a shame really because I can see that she is a good person stumbling down the wrong path.

Wow! The flashback really got to me. I could feel how hard it was for Danika to give up her baby girl. I can't imagine having to make that decision. It must be so heart-wrenching! Though I do agree with Danika's decision. She felt she was too young and couldn't care for the new baby properly, so she did exactly what any smart person would do. I'm proud of her! :)

I'm still wondering who this last boyfriend was of Danni's was that set her up. I wanna know! Ah! The suspense is killing me!

Okay...now I want to know who the one guy is that didn't screw Danika over. Are you going to reveal? I sure hope so or I may die from wondering. lol

Hm, it sounds like Paige struggles with period of almost like insomnia. I wonder what causes that. I'm guessing stress is a major factor.

C-Note seems to have taken a liking to Paige. He's a sweetie!

Who's house are they breaking into and why? Of course Lincoln would only care about no tv. LMAO

I'm SO glad Paige is ok. I was worried! She's a strong girl!

It's interesting to me to read this seeing as you're writing it and you haven't seen S2 yet. You're definitely going a way different direction with the escapees than the show did. I like it and I'm excited to see where you continue to go with it.

Michael seems to have taken a liking to Ms. Paige. Hm? *raises eyebrow*

Wow! Paige is definitely naive about the criminal system compared to Danika. They've definitely lived in two different worlds. I love the dynamic between them, but I have a feeling it's about to cause some very big problems between the girls. And Paige is about the get a rude wake up call on life! An on the run life is not exactly cushy.

My favorite scene was definitely the scene with Abruzzi and Paige talking about the gun. You nailed his personality here!

Update soon! I really love this! :D

OMG! I LOVE THIS! It's such an incredible and intense first chapter!

I really want to know who Danika's ex-boyfriend is and what he did to cause her to run for her life! Yay! I was thrilled when Michael showed up to help the girls, but of course the fricking alarm had to ruin it and they had to run. Poor Paige! I hope she's okay!

Please continue with this! :D