   tala-chan 9/26/03 . chapter 1LOL. very funny fic! and it's cute too!_ do another one! please? |
| Sara Jaye 3/19/03 . chapter 1 As much as I love CarrotxMarron...this was a bit strange. Carrot and Marron were both pretty OOC, it got confusing, and...since when did Marron have ashtma?
It isn't a BAD story, though. |
| LunarChild 7/31/02 . chapter 1 YO, Bunjy-chan!
Um...yeah...gay...hehe, LOL! This is...um...kinda good... Really funny! |
| Aroe 4/21/02 . chapter 1 If you wanna find HxH fics, type the key word "Killua" or "Kurapika" and you should find numerous !For myself,I've been writing 6 HxH ficcies...But they seem really bad because barely anybody reviews them ! Shikushiku...o |
| anon 4/8/02 . chapter 1 man you're sick! :p |
| Sorcerer Huntress 4/4/02 . chapter 1 okay...was that the sweet brutherly luv? just wonderin... cuz i was kinda confused... But.. I thought it was kewlness!_ |
| nightraid 4/4/02 . chapter 1 man bunjee, you're pretty good at making them look gay. DAMN! YOU"RE GAY AREN"T YOU! THAT"S IT! jox. you can do away with the script format. and...you don't have to emphasize things like ACCIDENTALLY seeing his brother's AHEM. it make people speculate...y'know. so, by the looks of it, they're gay, but not with each other. happie? v |
| Jin Freecs 4/4/02 . chapter 1 hey,why don't YOU write about hxh fics instead of asking everyone else to do it?just joking... |
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