I LOVE IT!

I am rereading your story. I love it! A friend said she estimated your chapters to be more than 50 pages is extraordinary. I read a lot of paper books and cannot ever remember a chapter being 50 pages. You are a role model for every writer. And the chapters read so fast because the characters are so believeable and the story is so facinating. no wonder if your readers ask you to write more -more often - me included. The offer of dishes and laundrey is still good. Aloha, Mia

Totally PWND! Fudgin hawt chpter! Woot Woot 1 year for the Fanglishious Intenseward and Broken-Kickassella! Update when you can katty niña I be waitin paitiently!

i love this storie the chapters are verty long and a much happens in it so i dont mind waiting for you to update. hope your sister is better sorry for the baby but 333

LOVE THIS! Absolutely adore this story, everytime it says you have updated i jump for joy, cant wait for the next update :)

simply beautiful story well done

Love Edward and Bella together at his place in this chapter... It is hard to remember she is only 16 when reading about them. Will he ever answer her queston - why her?

Glad to see you back and hope all is well!

I know Charlie is smart, but I do not think he will give B much credit for understanding where she works. He may go in amd make it known he is B's Dad, but I think it will be less of a problem that if Jake took her. But after that, Carlie may demand that she be escorted to work from then on. That may be a problem. So you update like one a month right? I only have to wait like 3 more weeks! I am so excited for the next chappie. You are doing great!

GOING CRAZEEEEEE! I LOVE THIS STORY! I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT! ITS DEEP AND HAS REAL LIFE PROBLEMS! A GOOD READ AFTER SO LONG! & IT HAS SEXY CHARACTERS! PLEASE CONTINUE IT TO THE END!

I have been going from one chapter to the next wondering how they can keep getting better but they just do. I love the time when she got the tat, I loved how he took care of her after the pig incident and totally adore how he cares for her now. I just feel so aweful for her to have to be between her familyt and her future. But I still want to know the question he has yet to answer: He said it took a long time to get to her. How long and why, why did he want her, how did he see her and what made hime want her. I know we are a bit passed that, but I can see her swoon by the answers he give. You dont have to answer those questions but will they be answered in the following chapters? God I love this story!

I am dying to hear what the kids at school think. You know that many saw Edward stake his claim and word spread like wildfire. I wonder what Mike's take on it is. Will he blab to the Wolves?

I sure hope she at least warns them that there could be trouble. That much could be deciphered.

I hope he has a conscience and saves her from the wrath.

First let me say that I feel for Bella. It has to be tearing her on two. Now, I would like to say that I know people can be mean, but eff them! You obviously have a sense of pride, great work ethic and a stong family bond. You my dear are of the top class of humans. Never change and do not let anyone make you feel bad for it. Jealous and selfish are among the deadly sins and maybe you should write them into your story and kill them off. Very therapudic!

I love Edward's obsession over her. He is hot as a lethal man. But poor Bella is so caught in the middle.