Gah! Why is this so angstyyyy, Idol twinny? Whyyyy? D:

/Pearl does not like angst O_O

/but Pearl loves your writing...

/Pearl is conflicted P

/Pearl will stop talking in third-person now ;)

ANYWHO. This was brilliant. I don't know how you did it, but you turned typical angst into honest-to-God tragedy, and it's so sad and awful, but you really made me feel for Molly, which is a good thing, sooo :) It was really amyzing, truly

Fantastic job, and keep writing!

Oh my god. I feel like someone just hijacked my brain and put my thought into an -as you put it- angsty freeverse. And it's in a way that made me tear up and have to close my eyes for a minute. You are my new all-time favorite writer.

I can see that happening, especially in such a large family!

It was very well-written and sad, I really liked how you used the free-verse:)

Mad, this was too beautiful! I have a strange love of Molly angst and this was great. I loved the flow of it and the line about being a terrible driver ;)

Don't let the voices get to you Maddykins, just beat them off with a baseball bat (I do :P) And I'm too lazy to log in on my phone! Fantabulous job Mad!

Heather Xxx

Oh Mad this is so angsty and it's just heartbreaking. It was so well written and the flow of it was just excellent. Poor Poor Molly. Her state of mind is obviously very fragile in this and she is in desperate need of some recognition, someone to save her. I really do feel for her in this and it was a wonderful conveyence of despair. Well done, Mad, it's gorgeous.

Madeline! This is beautifulllllll :D The imagery is PERFECT and this is brilliant.

Love you always! ;)

This line:

"and sometimes you just want to

end it all

but no, you're not brave enough"

It hits close to home, for reasons you already know.

This is stunnglybeautiful&&heartbreaking&&fullofangst.

An it.

(and you :)

And you know what, everyone cares about you. Everyone. :)

So get rid of those voices, dear. :D

Love you!

Wow. I love the angst in this. I love how all your characters in your stories express so much emotion, and I like how those same emotions are evoked in me too because it helps me write. Good job! I love Molly's character too; she has a lot to live up to.

'O

this was breathtakingly sad. It was beautiful, heartbreaking, and alive.

I love you, Mad.

**those three words are said too much, but not enough.

Mad, I love you to pieces and never forget that, okay?

And if you ever wanna rant or rave or e a good laugh or have a cyber shoulder to cry on, I'm always here for you.

Now, hkirtlhlsdkfhskledf!

First, I'll ignore how much I want to burst into heaving sobs and move on.

Holy heck, Mad This was so beautiful and so epic and so haunting and I'm. Freaking. Blown. Away. In. The. . Of. This.

This was breathtaking, Mad.

I love your characterisation of Molly - not important enough or good enough, a bite in the apple, etc.

This was absolutely beautiful.

-Jenny

awhh mad this was... beautiful...

you don't need to feel like that, we'ree all here for you3

I'm going to try ignore how sad the little bit at the end made me. Not the friends bit, the part about you.

Okay. Reviewing normally.

I loved it. You captured the emotions perfectly ( so) and you could believe it.

I'm wondering why Rose wasn't included in the everyoneelseisbetter part, and I loved that Molly sees that Dominique is evil.

I loved this:

and you're just a whisper

fragile, could be beautiful, rd

It's gorgeous. It reminds me of Invisible by Taylor Swift, yet it's original.

This was a wonderful piece of writing.

I'm always here to listen, Madderbear. I promise I'll always listen, and I'll try to be as there for you as I can, and I resent RL for getting in the way of that.

You're gorgeous.

An aimyzhieing person.

One of the best friends I'll ever have.

Jane xx

P. S. Never forget xx

Madeline, I love you. There, now I can complete my review, I like it, a lot. Angst or no angst it's lovely, as always your writing leaves me speachless!

So sad... :'(

I didn't know you wrote sad stuff, Mad

But this was really good. Amyzhieing stuff. The best kind of angst :)