Like a Boss.

This is a nice alternate ending to the scene at the Ministry. I like how you potrayed "Potter's Army", I'm sure there would have been something like that after the first war and during the second.

I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes.

Hmm, interesting! I like that you started with the quoted bit, it enforces the idea that it's an alternative ending and could have happened. I liked that there were all those people still loyal to Harry and that it only took that little push for them to surface. Other than a couple of little grammar mistakes (e.g. "But it was to late" should be "But it was too late"), it was really well written.

Good job! :)

This was an interesting little idea (and I use that word a /lot/ in my reviews to you). I like how you go off canon events and make your own story. You do it really well if I may say so myself. And I liked in the beginning how you did the whole division by percents. Good job!

That was a very interesting start. I normally do not like AU stories, this was well written. I can't really see Kingsley calling Harry Boss, though. Like I said the prologue did what it was supposed to do which is pique interest so good job.

i like the idea hope you continue

I always wondered what would've happened... Very good :)

This sounds like it could be quite fun. Can't wait for more. What a twist on the original scenario.

This looks like a great beginning to what looks to be an exciting story! There are quite a few spelling issues, though. I'd be happy to help if you'd like.