That was really silly, though in a good way.

I don't if I should laugh or puck. funny story, write more, we need more humor.

um... verry original. it should be longer

*laughs* Am I a late reviewer? The exciting thing about this oh so quirky tale, is that its so true! Dragonball/Z/GT has always been about diversity, and the ridiculous humor that comes through a genius like Akira can absolutely not be copied. But here, I see some seriously good stuff. It reminds me a little of DB/Z/GT and why I fell in love with it to begin with. Am I being too serious? You've inspired me. Thanks. -Natsu

Welcome to Bizarro World, Planet of the Fruits (and other food names)! So does this mean Saijins/Sayins are hermaphroditic like earthworms, and the *males* give birth, like Tenktonese cop George Francisco in ALIEN NATION? That may be something to look forward to in part 2... ;D