An interesting start, man. I can't wait to see what you got the next chapter. Can't wait to see how you get the crew coming a long.

Draco: Good luck, Clayface. -smirk as he slide into the shadows- You're going to need it, when you enter the Grand Line.

Good start, would have reviewed earlier but...I had no clue you put this up...oops. Anyway good start and hopefully you keep this one up lol, Melting Satues have gone through...what 5 changes lol.

Endo: Hey if he can't do it,

You'll either be in jail or about to be arrested by that time

Endo: Hey I'm Root! I can take care or a job from prison...I'll just need three donkeys, a cable, and a lobster

Looks good so far. Very well written. Interesting plot twist for an OC crew. I look forward to reading more.

If I had to offer any criticism, it would be to watch the swearing, particularly the f-bombs. I don't personally have a problem with it, but from what I hear a lot of readers get taken out of the story with such modern-sounding swearing. That's just what I've heard from a few people though.