Love the story! awsome work

This story rocked from beginning to end. I would welcome a sequel.

I loved it! Yes, I want to read the next story - OK? do I get a cookie now?

I really liked this story. I liked that Mr. Williams helped her out :) Be careful about skipping tenses though, it can confuse some readers. But, really good story! Can't wait to read the epilogue :)

I hope the epilogue contains some Jade/War.

And I think that even a couple more chapters would be nice

Why is chapter 11 blank?

I read the whole thing this morning and i gotta say it is really interesting. I am a little confused about Sam... I don't understand about her. I also am a little confused about Cath's relationship to Jade. or more to the point Jade's parents. it sounds like she knew them but I am not sure. I was interested to see Gris being so loving to someone. that is nice. and all around the story was very good.

Holy Cow! Intense! This is a great story! Continue soon!

Jax

More really soon I hope.

very kewl so far it isnt predicatable anymore! well ya know i alwas solve the murders and such one these shows before anyone else knows the plot so i guess its prob just me!

i knew who it was as soon as he said that they were getting to be good friends but i love the interp. of Griss

betcha the second person was a girl! on chap. 4 5'8 ish w/ 7 feet? hmmmm...sounds like...ME! AHHHHHH IMA CRAZED KILLER! LOL

i figured out it was 2 ppl when they talked about the knife upstairs. lol. im only on chap. 3 i like it so far! ttyl

Great now we hopefully get some Grissom angs/torture. Hope we dont have to wait too long to see whats in store for Grissom.

You have GOT to finish this story! It is quite well written. I like the idea

that you set it before the show actually started. This allows you to show a

side of Grissom, in particular, that is different from what we are used to

seeing, without compromising anything from the show. Good job!