one of the greats stories i ever read. i hope that you decide to finish the and not leave it up to my pathetic

THIS STORY IS AWESOME ITS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! And you are one of the best authors I have ever seen. Please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update soon. I want to see more of a sayian side from Gohan

I know it's been a reeally long time since you first updated but I love this story so much and please please please update!

I love the story. Please write more soon.

PLEASE UPDATE!

can i hav Goten?

I Love this story so far! Please update ya

Great story please update soon.

Gohan's MINE! If not Gohan, then the present eighteen-year-old Trunks! Hehe!

update fast this is like one of the best dbz fanfics i've ever read and make a humor story about shin&chibi-chan pwease!

Is Gohan gonna go beserk? He was forced to grow up when he was what? 5 or 6? That's about 12 years early for him to do that!

No Naughty Thoughts Videl, You Too Gohan!

I can easily see Gohan wearing that *drools* SNAP OUT OF IT _! You may not know my name..i guess

Under his wing? Right...whatever that means. Krillin is married though! 18 would beat the crap out of him for cheating on her!

No this is SO going on my faves list! Wow-brilliant humor and some of that romance fluff too-of and the last chappie was so sweet! Goten adopting Goku was just so cute! And I like the way you make Goten intelligent in this fic! But I agree with Videl I really wouldn't want to see Goten on a sugar high! I think this is brilliant, you can be sure that I will be reviewing with each new chapter-I'm bubbling with excitment, now Videl's got that frying pan, I feel sorry for Gohan! Oh and I was thinking about Pan's name a few days ago, well before I read this fic. A brilliant way to explain Pan's name though. So I have probably bored you to death with my very long review wich is getting longer as I type my boring rants. So keep going!
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