The beginning is good but the ending seems a bit rushed and abrupt. This made the story looks kinda unfinished. Overall it's wonderful, but it would have better if more were elaborated.

Cool story. It's definitly a different look at Mina and Mal. And I love the fact that Jade and Mal are brothers...that's a neat twist. I liked this a lot...very sweet.
By the way, you're right on with the slavery/state's rights issues in the War for Southern Independence.

Ooh I really liked this fic since it had Malachite. Very different, storyplot. Keep up the great work!

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This is one of the best love stories I've ever read. Keep up the great work!

It wasn't wierd at all. This was simply the MOST adorable fic I have ever read. I thought it was wonderful, and I can't wait to see if you've written anything else. In fact, I liked it so much that I'm going to stop gushing and head to your author's page. Keep it up!

Aw! This is such a cute story. I really liked it.

I loved this story. Im a huge Minako/Malachite fan, and this was a fun little twist on the story. Very fun. An enjoyable read.