This makes me hate the selfish Daria that we all know and, err... love... and really truly love the Charles that you can just see hiding beneath the Upchuck persona. Well done!

This is a cute interesting daria and upchuck fanfic *giggles* please continue writing more!

Aww! I love this story. It's.. so romantic, yet funny, and reassuring, and deep. Wahoo for depth. -clap-

It's great! How you put your story in with the original season and Upchuck and Daria? Pure genius!

That story totally rocked! There was just 2 things I didn't like about it. Daria was out of character and it should have been in all sepret chapters. Apart from that it was really great! I never read a Daria/Chuck fic before and this was a grat first one for me to read!

I thought that the characters were totally out of place, not acting like themselves. I don't know if you've realized this before, but Daria is sarcastic. And also, the format was difficult. I work much better when the chapters are seperated. I decided not to finish it because it wasn't in bite-sized chunks.

Hmmm, an interesting approach.. over all i like it... although it's slightly weird for a topic.. oh well.

i actully really like that story good job

Hella good! Write more Daria/Upchuck stories. Nice to know he has a personality outside his reptilian exterior. Two enthusiastic thumbs up!

frightening and yet fascinating...

Very enjoyable, and beautifully woven with actual events. Thanks for the mention, btw!

WOOOO HOOOO!"Upchuck" rocks! Sure, he's a little... confused at the moment, but I toatally believe the idea that he's really a nice guy, I just havn't seen many people write fics in which he is that are in any way believable.
Wouldn't expect anything less from you, but I have to say this is just so well done. Really romantic.

And once again, I am FLOORED. I am also humbled, awestruck and generally feeling like I will never be worthy to lick your boots (not that you would want me to, I'm sure).

Nicely done, Bunny! It's great to know there is such a thing as good shipper fic out there, and where to go to get it.

thankyou, thankyou, oh thankyou so much. To be honest, you were the last person i expected to rise to the challenge, and when i saw you had, i just had to read as always. I don't know how other things stand betwixt us, but i continue to think you a good read. thankyou for sating the evil beast within. (okay, i'm out now i'm the evil the daria/charles shipper) spank me if you dare)

I was really impressed with this piece. That isn't saying too much considering who wrote it really. The fact is I was impressed with all of your fics that I have happened across so far so me really liking this one is no great suprise. I was particularly thrilled at how you moved them through the series playing off their interactions on screen. It definately paid off storywise. I too felt the call of Tafka's challenge, but left it at one scene. Yours plays out much better. Nice job.)

Interesting. The way you wove your scenes around the existing scenes made it fairly realistic. You need more than the dialog and the bare bones of the actions though. Let us know more of what their thinking, either by telling us or better yet describe their body language. Some minor dissagreements on the Tom related scenes but they don't have a big effect overall. Please revise and/or continue the story.