|Reviews for human target fic|
| nova87 1/25/13 . chapter 11
It seems like Guerrero kinda likes Rachael, and I think its interesting to note that Chance and Guerrero never talk about Rachael moving in the office. This was a good chapter after the events from the reunion in the last chapter. I am looking forward to finding out who is after Rachael.
| nova87 9/15/12 . chapter 10
Rachael is getting more and more aggressive as this stories continues. I was rather surprise that she was able to do so much harm to Josh before Chance and the guys are able to stop her. The mystery still continues, who is after Rachael? I have enjoyed your relationship building with Rachael and Guerrero. Waiting to see which direction you take that in.
| cedricsowner 9/2/12 . chapter 40
it's great that you're still continuing!
| nova87 7/4/12 . chapter 8
Rachel being 5'7", I always thought Guerrero was taller than that. But nice chapter funny reading about Guerrero dancing, him being so serious all the time, but him and Rachael seem to have develop a nice niche between the two of them. How did Rachel know so much information about Josh? Looking forward to reading the next chapter to see how Jose ties into what has been going on.
| cedricsowner 3/13/12 . chapter 37
The cosplay setting is a really interesting idea!
| cinefila 3/6/12 . chapter 37
Joo why so short? I really like this story please write as soon as you can. (Sorry if i had made a mistake with the grammar but i'm not very well writing english, i'm studying).
Greetings from spain
| nova87 2/21/12 . chapter 7
Going to the class reunion, and Winston being in the van being the eyes and ears of team, fits his police background perfectly. Putting Rachael out front to see if they can draw someone out is what Human Target is all about. I like the pace of your story so far, and looking to see what comes next.
| cedricsowner 1/25/12 . chapter 34
"Rachael: " why did that just remind me of a horror movie."
LOL, that was funny!
| cedricsowner 1/17/12 . chapter 33
Really nice visual at the end.
| cedricsowner 1/2/12 . chapter 32
Whoa, Rachael is quite a talented girl!
| nova87 12/21/11 . chapter 6
Rachel and Guerraro spending more time bonding again is nice to see, considering that he rarely bonds with anyone. Shopping and buying a kitten, not sure if Chance's dog will like that. Ending the chapter with the kitten and Guerraro sleeping was a good peaceful ending to this chapter.
| veniceit 12/11/11 . chapter 30
Lol, someone should have warned Daniel to NEVER go to the docks with Guerrero... :)
| cedricsowner 12/11/11 . chapter 30
The last sentence was very Guerrero.
| nova87 12/3/11 . chapter 5
Class reunion definite a place where they will make a play for Rachel. Her making a deal to shop by hersell sounds like a bad decision. Onward to next chapter.
| veniceit 11/28/11 . chapter 29
glad to see you continue to work on this. As I read through the chapters you've managed to bring quite a few of the shows atributes very nicely into your chapters.