HAHA! Love how you make Thor unstoppable even though he is only 4 inches talll! Though that actually make sense as most of the frost giants in the cartoon series are the size of the Empire State building. Also love how you made Spiderman a trickster-as well as unknowingly revealing Ultron's plan to kill humanity. As well as show how Doctor Doom can literally walk right into Reed's building!

I Love doctor Doom, I hate johnny storm and i adore this story :)

That rocked. If only for the fact that I didn't see this coming, at all.
Yet again, the ultimate baddy comes off as an anti-hero :D
I hope Spidey manages to kill Johnny, that kinda thing could give someone heart failure! :D
Creepy, open-ended finale: great work in total!

Hmm. I really wasn't sure how they were gonna do it... But Good must triumph _

What's gonna be the conclusion? *eager*

Love using otherwise-idiots to accomplish useful things, don't you? :D
What on Earth is Doom doing? And Ultron is the definition of obsessed right now. Argh!

You just can't write anything without cataclysmic battles occurring, can you? :D
I'm eagerly looking forward to it!

Woah. Never thought I'd read such an effective counter for the Hulk :D
I love it!

You know, I love the way you manage to slip in someone from the Marvel universe in every chapter. Who's next? Apocalypse? :D
Still carrying on with the secret observation...
I know Herbie was neurotic but...
And what is Ulfie doing?

Okay, terrible injuries are your staple. That's normal.
What's with the CCTV obsession? There's always a watching camera!

Hey! Its a bit early for things to be going south...
What is Ulfie doing? Next thing you know, he'll be crafting a flesh body... :S

Hey, they didn't kill him, did they? Why does Ulfie have to be so creepy?

This isn't going to end well, is it?
Yeah, I was going to start on LU, but I got sidetracked while going through your other stories...

Well, its times like this that make me wish I was as articulate as writers like you so I could leave a review that actually reflects how I feel. This fic was great and I couldn't put it down (thank goodness it was already completed by the time I found it, waiting for new chapters of a really good fic is torture!). Hank and Jan are my favorites so its always really great to see something centric around their characters. Your writing is very enjoyable, and you did a great job with characterization. I was also very impressed with your action scenes, which I personally always wonder how some writers can pull them off so fluidly! Anyways, this was amazing and I'm glad that it was recommended over at TVtropes, because I most certainly would not have found it (I've waded through the Avengers:EMH section here once and didn't plan on doing it again).

Also, I totally caught those G.I. Joe cameos mentioned in passing in that chapter with the charity dinner. Nice little Easter egg!

I ADORE THIS STORY AND I WOULD LOVE IT IF YOU WOULD WRITE A SEQUEL! BUT IF YOU DONT THIS STORY IS AMAZING! BUT PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!