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Underworld Angel 6/7/11 . chapter 6lol the guys reactions :D great, now will the girls do now that the cats out of the bag? |
Gloxinia 6/7/11 . chapter 6SWEET! For the confessions I think adding 'sweet' at the end of them all was kinda repetitive, unless that was your point, you might want to change that. Well thank you for writing, and can I ask you to continue Total Drama Reality please? I would really like to read more! Great story and plot is quite good so PLEASE continue! |
Harm 5/30/11 . chapter 5 Luvs this 33 |
Gloxinia 5/28/11 . chapter 5Oh my gosh, when I read the summary i thought Gwen was the one that figured out that they are werewolves, but that's not true. It has quite a lot of suspense. Thank you so much for updating so fast. Also thanks for the different PoV. It's nice to see a different view of things sometimes. ANd I can't wait to see them pratice their powers, I wonder what Gwen uses as a power. Hmm... Please update soon. |
TheAmazingCasey 5/28/11 . chapter 4Sorry if this review sounds like a flame, but I believe that this story could be much better than it is now. My main tip for improvement is this: Add detail. It should not take the reader five seconds to read the chapter. Even if Phoenix is your main character, focus on the other characters as well. |
Gloxinia 5/28/11 . chapter 4'Alejandro: I don't get the song. Me: I can't believe you are that dense! (Hits Alejandro with a frying pan) Alejandro: OUCHIES!' The frying pan is once again the best weapons! To anyone that has seen tangled, you'll understand! lol |
Gloxinia 5/28/11 . chapter 3Oh poor Phoenix. Can we get some history on the sisters as well, please? How did they become werewolves, did someone mess up or are they born like that? |
Gloxinia 5/27/11 . chapter 2Oh I can't wait for more. Please continue soon. I love how they all have bird names. Personally I would preffer to use darkness as magic, because I love the night and the moon and stars, but It also goes with their names and in some stories it is know to be quite dangerous. Even though it is quite short it has great suspense and keeps the reader wanting to read more. Please hurry and update soon. |
Underworld Angel 5/26/11 . chapter 2Yay! I love your fantasy stories :) |
Gloxinia 5/26/11 . chapter 1Please continue it. It's really good and I can't wait for more. I'm really curious who was the one that found out and learning some background imformation throughout the text should be fantastic, if you choose to continue which I hope you do. The way you write it really catches the reader and the first time I read it I was really surprised and I wish to see more! Please Continue! |
LupusLover 5/26/11 . chapter 1It's good so far! Please Update! |