Great chapter!

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I'm ashamed to say that I'm a little confused about the age in the "present day." Guess I'll figure it out sooner or later.

I'm really enjoying your story though!

xoxo CanYouBelieveIt

I came up as a "Guest" TWO TIMES in chapter three! I'm logged in, too! I wish they'd fix that. I prefer to leave a review with my penname and not incognito. O.o
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Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 3

I hate when I come up as a "Guest" even when I'm logged in. o.O Drives me crazy!
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Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 3

Wow, Charlie's a mess. Bella grew up in a rough family life.

Wondering how she ends up around Edward.

xoxo CanYouBelieveIt

I hate when I come up as a "Guest" even when I'm logged in. o.O Drives me crazy!
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Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 3

Wow, Charlie's a mess. Bella grew up in a rough family life.

Wondering how she ends up around Edward.

xoxo CanYouBelieveIt

I'm glad you said something about jumping around in your notes, but I think I'm keeping up fairly well.

Edward is one sad dude.

I like Bella's daughter. She seems bright and doesn't cut Bella any slack.

xoxo CanYouBelieveIt

Wow, Charlie's a mess. Bella grew up in a rough family life.

Wondering how she ends up around Edward.

xoxo CanYouBelieveIt

Guest 9/26/12 . chapter 2

Ah, the 80's!

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Ah, the 80's!

Been meaning to read this for a while. Heard I'll cry a lot. Guess I'm ready for that. o.O

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Just amazing ...

THAT was a good story.

I thoroughly enjoyed going on this journey/tale along with your imagination. It was a screen-scroller for sure. I couldn’t stop reading.

Thank you so much for writing it.

‘...Leaving her left a scar that will, in all likelihood, never heal.’

It’s not these words in isolation. It’s all the words that came before it, all the emotions you have stirred up inside me to this point. All of it. It’s the reason I have tears running out of the corners of my eyes right now.

This story owns me. Thank you for writing.

I can't figure out how to logout from mine and mary's yellowbella account and into my own on my phone, but hi :) im writing this just as me, just yellowglue
, just sarah, hi.

Ive been wanting to read this for so long and am finally getting a chance.

I LOVE the smiths reference. I wondered when i first heard the story's title, if it was for the song. And that image, of her running across the freeway in the cold cold night was perfect!

I am curious and looking forward to more tomorrow night :)

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this!
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Sarahxxoxoxi

I think I'll need days and days to recover from this masterpiece. It has been a long time since I've come across a fic that made me feel so much at the same time! I never wanted to stop reading but at the same time, I wanted to slow down because I never wanted it to end. And now it has, and I feel like curling up in a ball on my couch and wonder what I'm going to do the next few days... Yup.
But seriously, this is one of the best fic's I've read. So different, so full of emotion, so brilliant!
I can't even find the right words to describe it all, but you sure do have a way with words.
I guess I just want to thank you for writing this down and sharing it with us. I'll never regret barely leaving my house to finish reading this story. It was worth it. Thank you!

Wow. A truly beautiful piece of writing. It's almost impossible to stop reading, will there be a sequel? You're an amazing writer. Your descriptions are great. all the characters and the plot seem well thought out. It's been great fun to read this story.
Skylair x