That worked surprisingly well. I'm not typically a fan of the "50 words" theme or whatever you want to call it, but it's nicer when it's in a whole story instead of shreds and pieces of one.

I'm also somewhat fond of the pairing, oddly enough. DA:O was one of my favorite games, but in hindsight, I was always kind of a jerk to Alistair. I'd always be his friend, but based on the ending I wanted, I'd almost always pair him with Enora, no matter how much he whined about it. I think the play-through I used in DA:2 actually was the one in which my male character married Enora, which means Alistair chose self exile rather than accept Logain being alive.

Yep, really need to get a properly play-through of both games before DA:3 comes out. Then again, with how hard Bioware is tanking everything it puts out thanks to EA, will it even be worth it?

Later,
Rex

Well. This was off-puttingly confusing. Whyfor the... # things? What is that supposed to add? It just chops up an otherwise fabulously tragic love story. If you were trying for a sequence of non-linear scenes or memories, this is not the best way to go it.

Poor Alistair, O for 2.

aww so sad poor hawke and alistair

This is just breathless.

This is so sweet, tragic, and utterly perfect. Thank you for writing it.

That is so sad! Sniffle! Definitely going into my favorites list. Thanks for writing it! :D

Oh :( So sad. If anyone deserves a happy, it's Hawke and Alistair. Proof that the path of true love never did run smoothly. Kudos for acknowledging the political fallout, as painful as it might be...

I love number 4... it just describes him to a T.