Dude, Ava that was so awesome. I regret not having read it sooner! I'll gush over it alot more next time you're online. I stayed up all night reading it, lol I only planned on reading it for a bit. *sigh* First day back from vacation tomorrow... er, today. Ack, it's 6:45! Need to go take my shower and then go to school. AKA Sleepfest.

LOL, kinda strayed a bit didn't I? Your fic was just so great! You had everyone perfectly in character, the plot was intriguing AND plausible, always a plus. I especially liked the way you wrote everyone's emotions. It... just too good for me to do it justice in a few words. The fact I didn't sleep all night also helps lol. It was just so... incredibly good!

Now, I shall begin my search for caffeine...-The Crazy Canuck

Ha ha! "her game sprite senses were tingling" Someone see Spiderman? This just keeps getting better and better! Just when i thought this was over, a new surprise and more hunting to do! And why aren't you on the ROM list, young lady? lol

This is great, AvA! Keep it coming!

Aarrgh! You can't keep us waiting like that! Great chapter, full of suspense. Write more, right now!

Woo hoo you've updated! LOL I love this fic AVA, it just gets better and better with every chapter. Can't wait to see what's happening with the PDi now.

(Takes out her Hex figure and puts on the tear mask.) You are making my Hex doll very sad here! I loved the Matrix and Ray fight. And Bob franticly trying to get everybody's attention was just beautiful! I need more! Why must people write evil cliffhangers? Please write more soon this is so good!

Sooooooooooo good! I don't know what else to say! LOL

Ooh, Megabyte having sprite-like feelings ... Well-written.

Awesome story. Love the bit with Megabyte there at the end- you captured the emotions perfectly, something few authors can do as well as you have. Well done.

Wow, Ava, that's some cliffhanger. This story just keeps getting better and better and more tense and brutal with every chapter. I love it. You have all of the characterizations down pat. I can't wait to read more of this.

hey folks! thanks for the reviews again and yes, there is a chap 9..and a chap 10 (possibly 11) then i start posting #2 in the series which i am releasing the title too for the first time"The Separation" Glad you enjoy it and hoep you continue to enjoy it. IM also going to be adding some scenes to earlier chapters as i go along. Cheers!

AHHHGGGGG! I thought the story was over! Grrrr...that's okay, cause I'm sure there's a chapter nine in you somewhere. Yes? Right? There is, yeah? This story has been just great. I'm looking forward to see if Matrix has learned anything from his experience.

Yeah! This just keeps getting better and better! The wolf questioning Matrix was my favorite part! That was just so perfect the way he found out what he was -! I liked the deeper meaning the game and the animals had. Hehe...Matrix is the brother wolf and The User is the horse's ASCII! -! Please write more soon!

Hey Ava, Great chapter! This fic just continues to go from strength to strength. I know I've already mentioned it but I love this game, so ... intellectual lol. That's the only word I can think of to describe it. Can't wait to read more from you.

LOL AVA! A cheeseburger. I can't stop laughing about that. Fantastic chapter. Very exciting indeed. I loved it. Can't wait to see what happens to mouse. Hope you have more soon.)

You have a really excellent story here. On the whole it's interesting, well-paced, and true to the characters. I'm really enjoying reading it, especially the latest chapter and that scene between BobnDot(which is one of the best of those that I've seen, I might add!). However, you really could use a proofreader on this. I've seen a bunch of typos, little grammar errors, and some tense changes in this that would be pretty easy to fix. The story's excellent, but these little errors really need to be edited out. If you'd like, e-mail me and I'd be glad to go over the fic with you. Good luck and happy writing!