Um. FYI the suffix -wen in names means 'maiden', for example 'Arwen' is 'noble maiden' or my name is 'fire-maiden,' more or less. If I remember correctly Mor is dark, darkness. So 'dark maiden,' 'maiden of darkness'. However, if she willingly and knowingly stole the awesome witch Morwen's name, I'm hunting down the author and roasting her.
Alive.

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Yo! Pleasure to read your fic, Sakira and Kage. I'm a recent recruit into the PPC and will be Protecting the Continuum along with you all as soon as I can get through the godawful fic my partner and I are Protecting the world from.

Anyway, the fic was great and well done, but there are a couple of things I noticed that irked me. Myst is a grammar fiend, so all I'll say is this: Betas are your FRIENDS. Use them well, please.

At any rate, thank you for ridding the world of yet another pesky Sue!

*gives you chocolate and the like*

hahahaha...that was funny. :) i absolutely detest mary-sues and i'm so glad something like this was made. absolutely bloody fantastic. >.< i'm starting to sound british...haha. i hope the next chapter would be out soon...and of course, i hope that the next chapter would be just as amusing and funny! :) or maybe even better...hehe. i wonder which fandom you're jumping into next...maybe the Yu-Gi-Oh section? there are just WAY too many badly written OCs there...

Okay, I love the fic, but I have a minor peeve. What is a "mydraal" blade, and did you mean "Myrddraal" blade? (Robert Jordan creation, somewhat like a ringwraith but - IMO - much more disturbing) Domo arigatou, and good job!

Apparate? Apparate? *cringes* Yes, it's so hard to tell the difference between the work of J.R.R Tolkien and J.K. Rowling...apparate?

Good story, but why is the korean girl speaking JAPANESE? And translations after the words are really annoying, put them at the beginning or the end. If they're in the middle of the fic it just distracts the readers. Do you have a beta?

This is pretty good, but there are several mistakes. You need a beta.

Other than that, great! Just be sure you don't get kicked off ff.net.

excellent and hilarious. Someone on the barrowdowns recommended this and I'm so glad I followed it up! You should see the fanfiction at w.barrowdowns.com. Mary-sues are multiplying by the second! Happy hunting!

hi!!! excellent fic! are you going to write more? there are thousands of those goddamned sues out there! Middle Earth needs your protection. anyhow, excellent job, and keep protecting the glories of Arda from the "new devilry"!!

namarie
~~Victoria

I love it! I've read several in this series (I'm still finding them) and this is particularly good. Unfortunately, I see this is the only one you've posted. I expect after TTT comes out there will be a flood of horrible fic. I hope to see you at work then!

Hilarious...you can bash my mary-sue if you want...it's called "Rana" but whatever faults it may have, at least the grammer and elvish is all correct. I like to think it's better than some of what's out there, but I guess it's still a mary-sue! I love the PPC! :)

Hey, I've read this four times, haven't I?
More please? Need for more nasty Mary-Sues? I'll find some; I found some really nasty ones.
Also, just go to 'search', and look for 'girl from earth' or 'true love' under the LotR section.
It works very well; I found at least forty, but the original PPC switched befored [we] could tell them. Anyay, if you're planning to continue, do so! I can't wait!!!!

That was great! I have been absolutely laughing my head off the whole time. I love it. Write more or I will call upon the llama god to turn your souls to cereal.

This is very funny. I love it. But is it true, that they took the original PPC off ff.net? And could you give me the e-mail addresses of Jay and Acacia?

Ezellohar Shark
ezelloharshark@hotmail.com

Hehe, brilliant. Come on, continue.