I really like this, but I just love your other story just to be happy and I really want to read more, but don't get me wrong I like this one to!

Good story, except that Clark Kent/Superman/Clark Luthor, never, ever, ever had green eyes! Blue eyes, blue eyes,, the kind of blue that is too blue to be for real.

Good Story

I like this...I wish they'd done it on tv.

Ooh...I really like this story. The way you've left things have me wondering, why does it have to be a one-shot? I really, really want to know what Lois' reaction is when she realizes she with Clark Luthor and not Clark Kent! Argh!

But having said that, I think Clark Luthor is redeemable, but to a certain extent. Aside from being with Tess, I'd like Clark to keep his edge. And to do what he does for the greater good and not evil. I guess I'm rooting for a better Clark Luthor because I'd hate for Lionel's influences to win over Lois' no matter what universe he's in.

Keep up the great job and I cannot wait to read your alternate version to Torn. :)

LoisNClark4Ever/TeamClois ;)