I think your confused... they wouldn't think Shaun's a templar just because he's Catholic. Religion doesn't factor into templary-ness. Templars are behind all sides of religious, politics, you name it. Whatever gets them power. Yes, the crusaders were antagonized in the first game and you're after the Borgia for 2 and Brotherhood, but it really doesn't factor into religious following. The assassins normally have a pragmatic view on religion (especially with the whole First Civ thing), but it doesn't mean they'd condemn their brothers for their beliefs.

A touching story. Job was a good place to start, and this is a fair reminder that we can't dilute our faith for 'easy listening'.

Just be careful. (and with 'God caused it didn't he?' it was Satan.)

I was skeptical at first, ( about the whole concept and how thus would pan out) but just reading from the first chapter you've written a decent personalization of Shaun. I take it you're going with the protestant faith here.

The opening was a bit abrupt, and still Shaun is highly relatable.

I almost cried when Shaun spoke to his mother ); I'm so happy how you ended this lovely little fic. :) They kissed!

Haha I love the reaction to Elijah! xD And these two are so cuuuute together :3 And the last part was so fun! I almost expected Des to say he heard the song when as Ezio - maybe those annoying street performers could have sang it back in Rome... or wait maybe the song is way too new for that xD See, your story is thought-provoking. :)

Haha, I'm glad my mom once told me the story of Job - I remember asking her similiar questions like Desmond - like why didn't he commit suicide. Still, that wouldn't have been that good of an ending I like how you write - very easy to keep up with who's talking since you manage to keep these two in-character. :D This one goes into my favorites

Now this is certainly interesting... I like that it's so straight to the point - like Des asking outright if Shaun is gay. Also I can kind of relate to these sort of conversations about belief and the bible. :) I'll keep reading!

You know, it's stuff like this that makes me want to believe. I loved it. Desmond had such a... well, me reaction to religion. Although, I never had someone like Shaun. Kind of sad how all the people that want me to believe won't sit and talk about it.

Though, that may be because I shy away a little at thoughts of religion. It's one of those things you can't really just fumble through on your own.

The story was beautiful. And, did I mention I loved it?

Wow. That was amazing. As a Catholic fan of Assassin's Creed, this meant a lot to me. Isn't it odd that Desmond so easily forgot that Ezio was a Catholic Assassin?

Very strange but intriguing concept for a story.

Your friendly neibourhood stalker here. It's a really good story, though I'm not Christian. Are you by any chance? It's still a good story

I love this! Words do not truly express how much I adore this! Thank you so much for posting it, it's now going to be my pick-me-up for when I'm feeling down. Keep soldiering on with your writing, you've got talent.

You know in the game the Templars don't believe in religion. That being said: wow. I mean really wow! This is the first of it's kind, an assassins creed fanfic that promotes a religion and not say: it was those who came befor! I love originality and this is most difenaly originanal! Congraulations and I hope you keep writing. (P.S. Why are the assassins so sensitive about faith? In AC 1 Altiar pretity much said men have a right to chose what they believe in and let us not forget the "Leap of faith". I would like to see a prequel fic telling how the assassins lost there faith.)

...I have never been this speechless or breathless like this before from a story. This short story was incredible, I can't describe it at all. The entire story was breathtakingly glorious. I love every bit of this, and the determination in the Lord and the strong faith Shaun and Desmond had. Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

XD I'm the first anon that commented on this fic! Thought I'd let you know. Happy that you posted it here, and this was an awesome fill!