Haha... We're doing Macbeth in school, and because we didn't have enough guy actors, Malcolm is played by my friend Skylar, who's a girl. So in my head, this isn't slash at all... Weird...

Gee, what a relief to see, that I wasn't the only one who thought of Yoda :-P

But apart from the yodaishness it is really sweet.

This is great! It's reallt sweet, and somthing I never really thought of before. The Shakespearean is O.K. too, but sounds a little like Yoda!

I couldn't read this, Scooter. I'm sorry but does the word 'indentation' mean nothing? A large block of script like this generally turns off readers...it's difficult to read.