|Reviews for SpiderMan: Evolution|
| Guest000 4/30/13 . chapter 16
Wow, what can I say other than wow. I love your story. Part 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and so on and so one were amazing stories, with great characters and plots.
I would like to see you use plots more identical to the comics, which was the reason I wasn't a fan of Ricochet and Tolensky, since they aren't villains from the comics. I'm up to part 12 in your story and I havent seen the symbiote or carnage. I would like to see them.
Anyways, you could also expand the character by making Peter join Horizon Labs. Honestly, I think the story requires more romance, and a lot of readers would like romance. Your writing is great and I like the use of present tense writing.
Anyway, you haven't updated for a long time and I am really looking forward to an update, but I understand since you write various types of stories with thousands of words.
Just saying, I hope that you are still writing the story. Great work and I look forward to more stories. I would very much like Norman Osborn to become Green Goblin (just a consideration, but it would be interesting.)
Thank you for writing this story and good job.
Great story, great language and great job.
| Guest 3/28/13 . chapter 16
I read a couple of chapters from your story but I can't go on to read more. I found too many cursing in the story and I wish you could change that. Other than that, I loved your story but there were a lot of mistakes.
| Key and Lock 2/10/13 . chapter 16
Great chapter. I liked a lot of the development, with Peter having to move on without Felicia and even Flash softened up a bit. Molten Man was also an interesting villian and I wonder if other people who were affected by the drug will turn up. The next chapter sounds like it will be very interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing the Punisher in action.
| Spidey Legend 2/9/13 . chapter 16
Great job man. I really like and hope for more.
PD: Superior Spider-Man is one of the most stupid idea that Marvel had ever put.
| MASTER-OF-SUPRISE 8/26/12 . chapter 15
I really enjoyed the first season. I can't wait for more.
| Key and Lock 8/18/12 . chapter 15
The long awaited break up chapter, huh. Well it was very good, I really felt bad for both of them, since neither of them wanted it to happen and they couldn't prevent it. The scene with Daredevil and Spider Man was very nice and it showed a friendly, brotherly sort of bond between them. A scene with Moon Kinght and Black CAt would have been nice since it would have shown Felicia stuggling with the break up as well, but I understand your reasoning for leaving it out. I can't wait for the "second season" please update soon.
| shugokage 8/15/12 . chapter 15
Good job I like the ambiguous plot because It doesn't feel like every other spider man fanfic!
| paycheckgurl 8/14/12 . chapter 15
Damn, I consider myself to be a slight theatre geek, and I don't know the play. I feel like you're going to tell me, and then I'm going to feel like an idiot because it's something well known.
Anyways my thoughts:
-A haircut plus tip for five bucks? Us girls really do overpay.
-As I've said right along, your handling of Peter and was really realistic. They felt like real people that simply realized they were in a different place in their lives.
-MJ and Harry's interaction was fun. They remind of some of my goofball friends.
-"Are you going to try the long distance thing, because television and movies tell us that never works." Great line.
-I'm officially in love with your version of Hobie. Even if he is "just a poor man's version of [Peter]."
I really enjoyed this chapter. Good job :D
| shugokage 7/20/12 . chapter 14
Great story I like the new perspective and point of view!
| Key and Lock 7/16/12 . chapter 14
Nice chapter. I liked how the fighting was split up, with Black Cat fighting Kraven, while Spider Man fought Vulture and then Scorpian, it worked out very well. I also liked how Taskamster helped Spider Man and took over his fight with Vulture, it showed that he's not really evil which I think is kind of an important part of his character, it would have been nice to see some of the fight, but with the way it was written it worked out very well. I can't wait for the next arc and all of the events you mentioned, they all sound amazing.
Oh, and I have to agree with you on the Amazing Spider Man movie it was great.
| paycheckgurl 7/15/12 . chapter 14
Awesome as always. It's going to be interesting to see what Fisk comes up with now that he has actual intel on everyone's fighting style (as well as all that stuff you teased in your author's note :) ).
| paycheckgurl 4/16/12 . chapter 13
Good chapter. As I think I mentioned I like how Peter and Felicia are starting to have more problems, but it's small stuff that's getting to them that's resolved at the end of the day. That's realistic, it's usually not just one big blowout out that destroys a relationship but a series of little things (ontop of an optional big blow out that's just the finial nail in the coffin.
Oh Peter, forgetting your best friend's birthday in the Facebook age takes skill. Especially if that friend is as likely to sing happy birthday to herself as MJ. Although this is set during the Evo timeline. Does that mean Facebook wasn't invented yet?
I have mixed feelings about Webb. Sometime's she's neat and other times you have to wonder if she's so powerful why she just doesn't use her reality wraping to save everyone herself (that was mostly the TAS version, though. I think the 616 version was restricted to vaguage visions and giving people trippy dreams). I like what you did with her here though, everything's vaguage and it's in the "might" happen class, not the defintly without a doubt will.
Anyways, good work. Looking foward to the next part:)
| El Contra 4/16/12 . chapter 13
I disagree. The only Marvel crossover excellent as all is Annihilation.
| Key and Lock 4/16/12 . chapter 13
This chapter was great. I liked the introduction of Madame Webb, I alwyas liked her in the old show. It was kinda sad to see Peter's first relationship continue to deterate, but it is better than just having them suddenly break up and it seems more real. I loved the part where Taskmaster was flying a jet and singing while he blew up the robots. Overall it was an amazing chapter, update soon.
| Son of Whitebeard 2/28/12 . chapter 12
Good to see the X-Men, this is what the chapter throughly enjoyable.