really enjoyed reading these, hope you make more!

Oooohhhh I like this! You're taking reviews? Cool! I would never be able to take that! lol, I love this soooo cyyuute! Fav!

Can u do franticshipping? Pwease? It's sapphire and ruby.

Another reviewer mentioned a child getting lost and a plot revolving around finding the lost kid. I like that idea but the kid should be cheeky and make inappropriate comments about Blue and Green's relationship.

Hahaha. Cute.

Running out of plots, eh?

Hmmmmm.

How about a child gets lost, and Green and Blue help to find him/her?

Ummm.

They have to go to another town to get something for Prof Oak.

Oh!

The Viridian Forest gets struck with lightning and catches fire, and the gang has to help put it out before it reaches town.(You can even have it as a twoshot with Down if you wanted. Have it take place the next day or something. Eh, whatever you want.
Here's a few suggestions. They just come to me, but I can't write short stories, they end up getting to be too long, and then I lose my interest, and... blah. .
Hope I've helped.

See ya next chappie! .

Another good chapter, I enjoyed it.

Cute chapters! x)

YEES, UPDATEE! :3 Teehee I love their relationship so much; they understand what's behind the facade they usually put on. It's so sweet and cute and aklgdkajghakgd ./rants.
Okay, I'm getting annoying. Anyways! I can't wait for the other two. :3

999...? Sounds kinda cool. :D

Very cute. .

Baby Charmander!3 Omg, adorable! x3
It definitely makes it worse that Green is smiling at the fangirls. Oh well, it's all good! We all know Green loves Blue anyways ;DD Teehee :3

Haha. I think what makes it worse then Green standing in the middle of a group of girls is that he was also smiling.

Baby Charmander. . Aaww.

And cute how he calls out his Charizard. And not realizing how Blue's not sleeping. .

See ya next chappie! .

Interesting and enjoyable to read once again)

Aaww. Cute. .

See ya next chappie! .

I LOVED this one! So cute and fluffy but not suffocating! 8D I like how their "relationship" builds up over a long span of time instead of just like...idk a day or something w*!
The ending is so cutee! I love it u;

Well I like this chapter, you have a knack for subtlety which is important because Green by nature is so impassive.